Reviews of In MHA With Madara’s powers
In MHA With Madara’s powers
MyStomachHurts
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
don’t expect much- There’s a lot of longer chapters but it won’t always be like that. From what others told me, the grammar is pretty decent and is readable. Updates, I update when I’m not busy Character design ? I tried to do my best so you could get that Madara vibes out of the mc
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So I went through 24 chapters and realized I haven't written a review yet to this masterpiece so here I am. [Writing Quality] is fúcking awesome no like seriously I have no issues with it, you can actually read it unlike the vast majority of other novels on this site. So what I'm trying to say here is that a rare novel has appeared that has actually functionally easily readable English. Seriously I only find like one spelling mistake in every 4 to 5 chapters and those are fúcking negligible. Also, the author actually knows the difference between 'He' and 'She' which at this point is an automatic 3 stars in any Webnovel novel. [Stability of Updates] Author says he writes whenever he is feeling like it, but I call bullshít because there is one chapter every day, [Story Development] This story has the perfect balance between not to fast and not to slow, There is no 20 chapter arc of the main character having training like in any every other novel, so no boring shít. The author skips canon stuff cuz who the fúck wants to read about canon when you know you can watch it? Instead, he takes the important parts in canon and expands it surrounding the main character. Like in the sports festival, for example, he skips the canon fights and only shows us the ones that actually have some plot significance and the ones that the main character and the secondary main characters participate in. The harem is small, with only 2 as of the now, With the author saying that 2 or 3 more will be added so at most the harem will be 5 members, so no worrying about gigantic fúck fests and the harem development is actually genuine, no 'Ohh you saved me! or treated me like a normal person! Please fúck me sideways and impregnate me!!!!'. He actually changes things in the story, so it isn't a carbon copy of canon, Momo, for example, is much more confident and easy-going compared to her counterpart because of how the Mc changed things by interacting with her since childhood. [Character Design] The Main character has Madara's appearance, power, without being a carbon copy of Madara. The Mc actually has his own quirks and personality, he's smart (thankfully), he knows how to use his future knowledge to the fullest, and he doesn't think with his lower body, and actually has humility and can take insults, unlike Chinese main characters, Also he isn't beta-like Japnese mc. He isn't arrogant well not like canon Madara or Gilgamesh arrogant or God forbid Wuxia characters, but he is confident in his own abilities as he should be. [World Background] It's basically the same as canon, with some changes. Momo is much more proficient and creative with her powers, she is proficient with martial arts. Nothing overly different like everyone having charka or something like that. Which makes this less confusing and something we all can read without much difficulty. Overall this story is awesome, It has an OP mc, but what do you expect when you have Madara's power in the MHA universe? It has a harem, but it's small and actually genuine, with no NTR since the author hates it( Thank God! with the amount of NTR novels on this site I'm convinced that some authors are cucks.) I recommend this story for people who like Op mc's who are actually smart and not arrogant shíts' I guarantee you will enjoy it.
The writing style in this story is far better than the rest of the trash that the Webnovel is filled with. I swear whenever I try to read any story from this app, it's as if I'm reading a recently puberty hit child's rant, instead of a proper narration style. I'm especially glad that this is one those rare stories in which narration style is not completed in just mere dialogues with names preceding them, but properly visualising the scenerio and emotions of the character. Can't wait to see more from this story.
....at the start of this story, in my opinion, the first chapter is my favorite, because the MC at the start seemed good, he was reasonable, didn’t scream to the world his thoughts, and WAS above intellect. .... ....but at the 2nd chapter this stories potential when to the sh*thole and down to hell. It’s was another harem🙄 ...wow...amazing... While the writing was mostly good, Absolutely hated the character, I came here to read someone who gained madara’s power and see him wreck that world with his power. What I got? Was a issei Hyoudou wanna be, with only three differences 1). Replace Draigg with Madara Uchiha abilities 2). Not an open pervert where everyone knows he is a pervert 3). And how he looks like, THAT is ALL that is different with then
Uninteresting and unrealistic premise and execution. I really don't understand the appeal of this at all, not even a little bit. It seems like another story without any integrity, just an OP MC and harem, nothing innovative. People praising it into oblivion, why? Horny and impassionated preetens? Just for its grammar? Does it really deserve such extreme praise just because of it? Another mystery to be solved...
The writing style is far better than most fanfiction on webnovel. The concept of having madara in BNHA as the adopted brother of momo is new and intriguing. As it is still early in the story I can't say to much but from what I have seen so far this story is very much to my liking. This is a harem story and so for those who dont like harems well to bad just dont read it.
This story is nowhere near as good as it could be as the mc is just some horny pervert who wants a harem. Tbh the mc is basically issei except way more powerful. Author I had faith in this story but you ruined it with all of the mc’s focus being put into getting a harem. Stay away from this story unless you’re some horny perv who can’t control his sexual urges. I’ll admit this story in quality is pretty good but, besides that it sucks donkey @ss.
I would like to say that the story is good, but I would be lying, at the beginning I expected a lot from the story, great expectations, but the story continued, there is no suspense, there is no conflict, the Fic is basically "Slice of life" in a world with super powers, of course, there are villains and it seems that the author is trying to do interesting things but in my opinion not only is he not succeeding, but he became monotonous, boring, I highly recommend the author to either rewrite the story or start a new one.
This is just me nitpicking, you can ignore this. Ahhhh, my eyes hurts, i read too much "MADARA" in this novel, I don't know why I hate Madara so much, not his character, power or his ideals but his name, a fukin' name! I tried to fit other name from Naruto to this novel and it feels the same, its weird. either their name doesn't fit in the modern times or its just fit to where its belong. Oh then maybe thats the reason i hate word "MADARA" so much? well, no, I really hates it.... The romance is awful, this novel might be good if the protagonist just go straight become cool-protagonist ignoring the vageena around him. No, I'm not a member from harem-hate sect, I love harem! but in this one? no.... that cringe lovey-dovey conversation and the sub-character that simply plain and not worth as a harem in a harem genre. and i still can't accept when the MC set to look like MADARA but a flowery sentence comes from his mouth, I just can't.... although he is Nathan, but reader mindset will comes to the real MADARA. because his name is MADARA. So, should you read this fanfic? ummm, I don't know, give it a try first. especially BNHA and MADARA fans. maybe you will like this novel... Damn, i really hates MADARA..... -_-
The premise of the story is, dude got wrecked by flying truck-kun, reincarnated to hma as madara, by the use of his convenient power called luck a.k.a. plot convenience. He isn't transported, deported, transmigrated or any of that kind of shxt, he goes out from the other hole after peepee hole, no not that hole that looks like a chrysanthemum, the other one. After getting out, he laughs, because he is a ducking masochistic perverted motherducker. Yeah, he didn't cry because, he's hurting all over by being evicted through that hole you shoot your dingdong, he laughed at it. So the story progresses, and his mother died shortly after his birth, and his father is, surprisingly, also dead, so we came to the house of the friend of his parents, that is surprisingly, the house of one of his conquest, oh! I forgot, he doesn't think with his dick, he just named 3 women that he wants to conquer straight out, just for the heck of it, well if their are other's who wants to get picked that are hot, might he add them too on his shag list, he's not really perverted, just want to shag a couple of kids here and there, then add a few more on the road. Anyways, continuing to the story, 4 years passed, too fast, he still treats his foster parents as nothing but an impostor, no just kidding, he doesn't even know them, they're just convenient strangers, that is giving him tons of stuffs so, he's pretending to love them, well whatever, he unlocks his sharingan and chakra thereafter. The end, oh! He began training, using tons of thing he shouldn't have known, and began doing ninja stuffs, but the strangers, just thought of it as normal and just ignored everything weird about it, he's lucky by the way. I'll be honest, I don't like stories that retains their memories when reincarnating as a baby. An infants brain can't even retain information that long so how does he have that kind of memory, unless his brain is fully developed at the start. You could've done something like progressively unlocking memories through dreams, so he won't be too overpowered, but has great potential to do so. But, you just have to want the mc to train as a child like everything is normal and no problem would arise with it. For the sole purpose of wanting to stomp those, within his grade and pose a few for those lovely ladies. His oh so convenient luck is good, but your execution is just so bad, having a character with great luck is ok, but a fated luck, like everything just revolves around the mc is just plain bad. His conquest about his harem, started out so bad, that it just feels like he's a perverted lolicon, who would just act like some douche, and bitches just follow. He straight out tells who he wants, and yep, knowing that he'd atleast conquer 3 woman just cause he wants to be a dixk, and pick up some scraps along the way, just leave a bad taste in the mouth. It's hard to get invested in a novel that you know he'd fxcked them, but you're expected to wait on how he ducked them, how will their story progress? I think it's more of a, how will he coax them so that he can add them to the shag list. His training, as a kid, not being questioned about it is like a plot, that you just throw out, so that mc would stomp people, and go full face slapping, is just full self insert, ego booster, so that you could become better than everone else, and it feels like, you didn't even thought about the plot, just straight out write what you think would boost your ego, even if the mc doesn't have character growth. As I said, I just ducking hate stories that reincarnated as an infant, so that you have a reason to train and become so op before the start of the real plot. For the sole purpose of ego boosting.
=== WARNING DON'T READ THIS TRASH, A WASTE OF TIME == I can't even finish 2 chapters MC has a twisted logic he doesn't want to have emotional attachments to his adopted parents and worse even to his biological parents! WHAT AN UNGRATEFUL B*STARD his adopted parents shower him with love provides everything he needs (Rich Parents) but to him, they're still equivalent to a f*cking strangers a STRANGERS!! (MC is a f*cking LEECH!) and the B*STARD intend to have a HAREM!?!? with that twisted logic of his? I bet he wants them because they're popular in the anime he watches in his previous life, He sees them as COLLECTIBLES, not women. Just DIE and reborn as a LEECH like he is!! === I'm not even surprised if this review will be Deleted by the Author
Was this dropped? if so that sucks this story was actually amazing imo and it was very satisfying to read, the mc while not fully being like madara, was alot like madara in the ways he deals with his opponents and how he's battle hungry, his attitude changes perfectly when dealing with people he loves and that was a good thing imo because it showed that he wasn't fully like madara and kept part of his original personality just like the god said he would. Anyways all in all the story was amazing the fights were good and brutal at some points just like how you'd expect madara to fight, the interactions between the different characters were amazing, and the relationships he had with his lil girlfriends were pretty good because it was a respectable harem which made it a lot easier to accept. What I mean by that is, the MC gets permission from his girlfriends first before he pursues another women, and on the off chance that he didn't get permission he would still talk to them abt it instead of just telling them to get over it and accept it. Well anyways, I hope the author starts updating again, cause this was the best Madara reincarnation fan fic I've seen/read.
