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In MHA With Madara’s powers

Author: MyStomachHurts
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Lord_Shiva_
Lord_Shiva_Lv14

So I went through 24 chapters and realized I haven't written a review yet to this masterpiece so here I am. [Writing Quality] is fúcking awesome no like seriously I have no issues with it, you can actually read it unlike the vast majority of other novels on this site. So what I'm trying to say here is that a rare novel has appeared that has actually functionally easily readable English. Seriously I only find like one spelling mistake in every 4 to 5 chapters and those are fúcking negligible. Also, the author actually knows the difference between 'He' and 'She' which at this point is an automatic 3 stars in any Webnovel novel. [Stability of Updates] Author says he writes whenever he is feeling like it, but I call bullshít because there is one chapter every day, [Story Development] This story has the perfect balance between not to fast and not to slow, There is no 20 chapter arc of the main character having training like in any every other novel, so no boring shít. The author skips canon stuff cuz who the fúck wants to read about canon when you know you can watch it? Instead, he takes the important parts in canon and expands it surrounding the main character. Like in the sports festival, for example, he skips the canon fights and only shows us the ones that actually have some plot significance and the ones that the main character and the secondary main characters participate in. The harem is small, with only 2 as of the now, With the author saying that 2 or 3 more will be added so at most the harem will be 5 members, so no worrying about gigantic fúck fests and the harem development is actually genuine, no 'Ohh you saved me! or treated me like a normal person! Please fúck me sideways and impregnate me!!!!'. He actually changes things in the story, so it isn't a carbon copy of canon, Momo, for example, is much more confident and easy-going compared to her counterpart because of how the Mc changed things by interacting with her since childhood. [Character Design] The Main character has Madara's appearance, power, without being a carbon copy of Madara. The Mc actually has his own quirks and personality, he's smart (thankfully), he knows how to use his future knowledge to the fullest, and he doesn't think with his lower body, and actually has humility and can take insults, unlike Chinese main characters, Also he isn't beta-like Japnese mc. He isn't arrogant well not like canon Madara or Gilgamesh arrogant or God forbid Wuxia characters, but he is confident in his own abilities as he should be. [World Background] It's basically the same as canon, with some changes. Momo is much more proficient and creative with her powers, she is proficient with martial arts. Nothing overly different like everyone having charka or something like that. Which makes this less confusing and something we all can read without much difficulty. Overall this story is awesome, It has an OP mc, but what do you expect when you have Madara's power in the MHA universe? It has a harem, but it's small and actually genuine, with no NTR since the author hates it( Thank God! with the amount of NTR novels on this site I'm convinced that some authors are cucks.) I recommend this story for people who like Op mc's who are actually smart and not arrogant shíts' I guarantee you will enjoy it.

Deus_Lobo
Deus_LoboLv4
Poporu
PoporuLv10

The premise of the story is, dude got wrecked by flying truck-kun, reincarnated to hma as madara, by the use of his convenient power called luck a.k.a. plot convenience. He isn't transported, deported, transmigrated or any of that kind of shxt, he goes out from the other hole after peepee hole, no not that hole that looks like a chrysanthemum, the other one. After getting out, he laughs, because he is a ducking masochistic perverted motherducker. Yeah, he didn't cry because, he's hurting all over by being evicted through that hole you shoot your dingdong, he laughed at it. So the story progresses, and his mother died shortly after his birth, and his father is, surprisingly, also dead, so we came to the house of the friend of his parents, that is surprisingly, the house of one of his conquest, oh! I forgot, he doesn't think with his dick, he just named 3 women that he wants to conquer straight out, just for the heck of it, well if their are other's who wants to get picked that are hot, might he add them too on his shag list, he's not really perverted, just want to shag a couple of kids here and there, then add a few more on the road. Anyways, continuing to the story, 4 years passed, too fast, he still treats his foster parents as nothing but an impostor, no just kidding, he doesn't even know them, they're just convenient strangers, that is giving him tons of stuffs so, he's pretending to love them, well whatever, he unlocks his sharingan and chakra thereafter. The end, oh! He began training, using tons of thing he shouldn't have known, and began doing ninja stuffs, but the strangers, just thought of it as normal and just ignored everything weird about it, he's lucky by the way. I'll be honest, I don't like stories that retains their memories when reincarnating as a baby. An infants brain can't even retain information that long so how does he have that kind of memory, unless his brain is fully developed at the start. You could've done something like progressively unlocking memories through dreams, so he won't be too overpowered, but has great potential to do so. But, you just have to want the mc to train as a child like everything is normal and no problem would arise with it. For the sole purpose of wanting to stomp those, within his grade and pose a few for those lovely ladies. His oh so convenient luck is good, but your execution is just so bad, having a character with great luck is ok, but a fated luck, like everything just revolves around the mc is just plain bad. His conquest about his harem, started out so bad, that it just feels like he's a perverted lolicon, who would just act like some douche, and bitches just follow. He straight out tells who he wants, and yep, knowing that he'd atleast conquer 3 woman just cause he wants to be a dixk, and pick up some scraps along the way, just leave a bad taste in the mouth. It's hard to get invested in a novel that you know he'd fxcked them, but you're expected to wait on how he ducked them, how will their story progress? I think it's more of a, how will he coax them so that he can add them to the shag list. His training, as a kid, not being questioned about it is like a plot, that you just throw out, so that mc would stomp people, and go full face slapping, is just full self insert, ego booster, so that you could become better than everone else, and it feels like, you didn't even thought about the plot, just straight out write what you think would boost your ego, even if the mc doesn't have character growth. As I said, I just ducking hate stories that reincarnated as an infant, so that you have a reason to train and become so op before the start of the real plot. For the sole purpose of ego boosting.