don’t expect much- There’s a lot of longer chapters but it won’t always be like that. From what others told me, the grammar is pretty decent and is readable. Updates, I update when I’m not busy Character design ? I tried to do my best so you could get that Madara vibes out of the mc

So I went through 24 chapters and realized I haven't written a review yet to this masterpiece so here I am. [Writing Quality] is fúcking awesome no like seriously I have no issues with it, you can actually read it unlike the vast majority of other novels on this site. So what I'm trying to say here is that a rare novel has appeared that has actually functionally easily readable English. Seriously I only find like one spelling mistake in every 4 to 5 chapters and those are fúcking negligible. Also, the author actually knows the difference between 'He' and 'She' which at this point is an automatic 3 stars in any Webnovel novel. [Stability of Updates] Author says he writes whenever he is feeling like it, but I call bullshít because there is one chapter every day, [Story Development] This story has the perfect balance between not to fast and not to slow, There is no 20 chapter arc of the main character having training like in any every other novel, so no boring shít. The author skips canon stuff cuz who the fúck wants to read about canon when you know you can watch it? Instead, he takes the important parts in canon and expands it surrounding the main character. Like in the sports festival, for example, he skips the canon fights and only shows us the ones that actually have some plot significance and the ones that the main character and the secondary main characters participate in. The harem is small, with only 2 as of the now, With the author saying that 2 or 3 more will be added so at most the harem will be 5 members, so no worrying about gigantic fúck fests and the harem development is actually genuine, no 'Ohh you saved me! or treated me like a normal person! Please fúck me sideways and impregnate me!!!!'. He actually changes things in the story, so it isn't a carbon copy of canon, Momo, for example, is much more confident and easy-going compared to her counterpart because of how the Mc changed things by interacting with her since childhood. [Character Design] The Main character has Madara's appearance, power, without being a carbon copy of Madara. The Mc actually has his own quirks and personality, he's smart (thankfully), he knows how to use his future knowledge to the fullest, and he doesn't think with his lower body, and actually has humility and can take insults, unlike Chinese main characters, Also he isn't beta-like Japnese mc. He isn't arrogant well not like canon Madara or Gilgamesh arrogant or God forbid Wuxia characters, but he is confident in his own abilities as he should be. [World Background] It's basically the same as canon, with some changes. Momo is much more proficient and creative with her powers, she is proficient with martial arts. Nothing overly different like everyone having charka or something like that. Which makes this less confusing and something we all can read without much difficulty. Overall this story is awesome, It has an OP mc, but what do you expect when you have Madara's power in the MHA universe? It has a harem, but it's small and actually genuine, with no NTR since the author hates it( Thank God! with the amount of NTR novels on this site I'm convinced that some authors are cucks.) I recommend this story for people who like Op mc's who are actually smart and not arrogant shíts' I guarantee you will enjoy it.

The writing style in this story is far better than the rest of the trash that the Webnovel is filled with. I swear whenever I try to read any story from this app, it's as if I'm reading a recently puberty hit child's rant, instead of a proper narration style. I'm especially glad that this is one those rare stories in which narration style is not completed in just mere dialogues with names preceding them, but properly visualising the scenerio and emotions of the character. Can't wait to see more from this story.

Even if the author said he hasn’t made a story in his life, it’s still pretty good to read. Even if the author says no to take it seriously, it doesn’t seem like those BS crack fanfictions. I simply love Madara’s character so I hope you don’t drop this.

....at the start of this story, in my opinion, the first chapter is my favorite, because the MC at the start seemed good, he was reasonable, didn’t scream to the world his thoughts, and WAS above intellect. .... ....but at the 2nd chapter this stories potential when to the sh*thole and down to hell. It’s was another harem🙄 ...wow...amazing... While the writing was mostly good, Absolutely hated the character, I came here to read someone who gained madara’s power and see him wreck that world with his power. What I got? Was a issei Hyoudou wanna be, with only three differences 1). Replace Draigg with Madara Uchiha abilities 2). Not an open pervert where everyone knows he is a pervert 3). And how he looks like, THAT is ALL that is different with then

Uninteresting and unrealistic premise and execution. I really don't understand the appeal of this at all, not even a little bit. It seems like another story without any integrity, just an OP MC and harem, nothing innovative. People praising it into oblivion, why? Horny and impassionated preetens? Just for its grammar? Does it really deserve such extreme praise just because of it? Another mystery to be solved...

The writing style is far better than most fanfiction on webnovel. The concept of having madara in BNHA as the adopted brother of momo is new and intriguing. As it is still early in the story I can't say to much but from what I have seen so far this story is very much to my liking. This is a harem story and so for those who dont like harems well to bad just dont read it.

This story is nowhere near as good as it could be as the mc is just some horny pervert who wants a harem. Tbh the mc is basically issei except way more powerful. Author I had faith in this story but you ruined it with all of the mc’s focus being put into getting a harem. Stay away from this story unless you’re some horny perv who can’t control his sexual urges. I’ll admit this story in quality is pretty good but, besides that it sucks donkey @ss.

I would like to say that the story is good, but I would be lying, at the beginning I expected a lot from the story, great expectations, but the story continued, there is no suspense, there is no conflict, the Fic is basically "Slice of life" in a world with super powers, of course, there are villains and it seems that the author is trying to do interesting things but in my opinion not only is he not succeeding, but he became monotonous, boring, I highly recommend the author to either rewrite the story or start a new one.

Definitely better than 90% of all of the other trash fics here on webnovel. My suggestion would be to delete your own review as it may scare away some potential readers, who enjoy 'my hero academia' fics.