Alemillach
The Prequel to the first ever contracted original novel on the sight has everything you've come to expect from Last Wish System, well thought out lovable characters, Amazing world building, believable interactions, a powerful system guiding the main hero but making him do the work to unlock more. A bit of mystery, a lot of revenge, what's not to like?? Come join the adventures of Shiba, Eini and Lina as they grow, learn, loose and win.
Having read Last Wish System, I've been looking forward to the prequel! It's great being able to see Shiba's origin. Despite a few common typos, which I mostly attribute to English not being Ale's first language, the story and setting are well thought out and easy to understand. Keep up the great work, Ale!
Excellent story but I wish there was a clear representation of the power levels. πππππββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ-//ββββββ-//ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ-
The writing quality is good with minor typos and grammatical error. The story development is not forced and has a great flow. The characters doesn't betray the the character design and it is interesting to see how they grown to the characters in LWS. The world background is detailed and the missing information can be backed up in the later chapters. Overall, its great and thank you to the author for writing the book.
The limited vocabulary and multiple grammatical errors in each chapter detract from the novel (english translation?). As well, the story is a bit plodding and pedantic at first, failing to draw you in to read more. The MC is simple, mildly interesting and inquisitive, but his mode of speech and mentality do not follow true to his background. He behaves in a manner against his established background and character constantly, constantly changing from naive to knowledgeable, uneducated to intellectual. The world was already well developed as this is a prequel to an existing world, anf the writer updates regularly. the story plotline seems interesting enough, but the mediocre writing quality and poor character development/consistency detract from the novel.
Everything is just so good. I just catch up with the latest chapter in one night without a wink of sleep. I even pay with coin. This is the first time I buy coins. It is that good. Totally recommended!!! Still a lot of mystery here, make me very curious. This is also the prequel of Last Wish System, the first contracted webnovel. TBH I haven't read that yet. I think I will be reading them now while waiting for this novel to update HAHAHA
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