Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated As a Fox With System

The pace in conversation is way too fast and is jumping all over the place. I feel like I’m listening to a toddler excitedly trying to explain something while babbling.

THAT DAMN MONKKEEEYYYYY!!!

The story immediately starts at a moderately fast-pace, so I have a feeling that this book will be gripping and action filled :D I adored the nods to the Monkey King and other deities xD

Hi Godadi, I've been enjoying your novel a lot, but feel it could use a bit of editing. I'm going to copy a chapter or two into googledocs and spruce them up a bit. I'll watch my notifications for a reply here, or you can contact me on discord I'm loeri#3783. If you prefer an email I'll give you that, but I would prefer to not give it out in such a public place. Hope to hear from you soon!

i'm able to make sense of what the writers trying to say but your using , and ; in weird places. also it feels like some sentences are missing words that would help the story flow smoother.

Looking forward for more

This is a great story

Loving this

do I need to have any knowledge about chinese mythology?

Great 😊

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I liked!

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Ooohhhh what a good find

Interesting

gut geschrieben. Auch wenn ich nicht alles so leicht verstehe

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oo oo ah ah oo oo ah ah and so on and so forth

Is there a discord link for the Novel?

good