Arpad
So the author is deleting reviews now, probably don't want the truthfull reviews saying about what he wrote in chapter 8. It was a good story until he had the briliant idea of turning a 5-6 years at the time harry potter even thought he's not 5-6 years old mentally into a female cat and have him be raped by male cats. This story should have the tags for zoophilia/genderbender/rape if it had that i would never even think about reading this. I just saved the review so i could copy paste it again when he eventually delete this again.
Childhood fic, turned into a fem. Kneazle then gets gangbanged. I had been contemplating dropping the story before that, and will do so now. What had me contemplating dropping it was because nothing ever happened. Most of the story is him sitting on his ass cultivating. Then he makes a kneazle friend in chapter 7 or 8, shifts into a female kneazle and gets gangbanged as a result. It was boring as **** before, and the only think keeping me reading was the fact that I did not know world seed. The freak scene made was the deciding factor to help me drop the story. So read if you like boring stories, where the character only cultivates and then gets gangraped and says it felt mind numbingly good....
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I try my best not to judge people based on their fetishes but this is just disgusting. Zoophilia is one fetish that I just can not wrap my head around. Not only that, but he was like 5 or 6 years old at the time. You made a kid get turned into a female cat, then gang raped by a bunch of males. Disgusting Another thing. I've seen you spout crap like "oh I put an R18 warning bla bla". Seriously man, that is not a real warning. When I see an R18 warning I'm certainly not expecting gender bender, zoophilia, gangbang, and rape all in one package.
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i felt the need to write a review with all the hate in this section yes at chapter 8 some messed up stuff happens but every one who read the description knew stuff like this was likely on the side of rape that wast what happend the dude could turn back to a human at any time and leave he chose to continue thus not rape. This is the authors first time righting and should receive respect and if you dont like where the story is going give polite criticism and stop reading. I hope you see this author and come back to write some more hate is not what you should take just roll with the punches