Reviews of Heavenly Deity

Writing Quality- So any grammar mistakes but readable -2.5/5 Stability of Update - Good, daily update 5/5 Story Development - Same plot with Desolated Era, just change a little bit in the story. Secondly, if you're making a fanfiction the plot should be yours, —Not stolen and copying the real novel— very disappointing for a Desolated Era fan like me. 1/5 Character Development -I'm very disappointed with this. First, The Mc saved a little girl paying his life, but, instead of calling an ambulance, IDC but someone said 'CALL THE POLICE' the heck? Why would someone call the police? First of all, the truck driver didn't know that there was a girl in the road. Secondly, at the moment, Mc saved the little girl, it was like 'SAVING SOMEONE ON ACCIDENT' so why write 'SOMEONE CALL THE POLICE?' So Childish and unrealistic. Furthermore, the characters are stolen from Desolater Era. I mean come on if you say this is fan fiction, you should put this on the FanFiction section, not on the novel section. (Lmao, no originality) 1/5 World Background- Same with the Story Development. The author merely copied from Desolated Era. 1/5 Also, I'm very disappointed with the author. (Primordial Serpent) Why the heck bothering to upload stories when you dropped it midway? So stupid, no one will read this knowing that you're a trash author who drop their novel midway without thinking about their fan. Truly a disappointing author.

Me rating my own book and voting for it is not being biased nor shameless, I think it shows my uhh. Umm My...hard work, yea my hard work. Thx for reading. Stay safe guys.

First of, I do not think it is shameless to rate your work. I think it is novel promotion. U are ur biggest fan. That aside, nice work. Yipee a fan fic... 😭😭 sad I do not know which fan fic it is. Nevertheless, great story.

-no problem at the novel so far -i really like it i just hope the mc find his soul mate xD -welp i hope this novel dont get dropped suddenly

Alright, three chapters in, the story is weaved passingly well. Since this is a fanfiction of the Desolate Era, I am not goin to comment about the world background. I think I'll just nitpick about the grammar. 1) the paragraph formatting is a real pain. Every paragraph has an extra space before it 2) the sentences conveying a meaningful should be clubbed together but here, each sentences have been seperated into new paragraphs 3) I think a round of proofreading shouldbe be done before uploading the chapter as I could notice 3-4 mistakes in each sentence. There were quite a number of typos I tried to ignore the errors and enjoy the story but it became irritating when I reached chapter 3. When it is edited, this would turn into an enjoyable story

The novel is pretty good, little to no errors. And since it is desolate era I liked the book even more. This book seems less rushed unlike most desolate era fan fics.

The fanfic is good, but it would really be great if I know what the fanfic is. There are some minor errors, but nonetheless it's good. Keep doing a good job.

Well I would like to start off by saying author your doing a really good job with the characters and world background you should use this fanfic to refone your craft it’s not sloppy but not great either but from theses few chaptes I can see you’re getting better if you continue down this road this fanfic could possibly become one of the top ten fanfic

Really good fanfiction plz more 😁😁😁😁😁💯💯💯💯

Sorry for removing my last review.. it was accident. This novel is good ..........$:(272&3?3)292’rbsojebfusjabehridjabehdjdnveudhebwgdufbshwufbbeuwne

Shameless author back at t again with a rate for his own book on his other account. Please forgive me for this. Have a nice year guys lol... Really, imsorry