Review Detail of Overlord_Venus in Heavenly Deity

Alright, three chapters in, the story is weaved passingly well. Since this is a fanfiction of the Desolate Era, I am not goin to comment about the world background. I think I'll just nitpick about the grammar. 1) the paragraph formatting is a real pain. Every paragraph has an extra space before it 2) the sentences conveying a meaningful should be clubbed together but here, each sentences have been seperated into new paragraphs 3) I think a round of proofreading shouldbe be done before uploading the chapter as I could notice 3-4 mistakes in each sentence. There were quite a number of typos I tried to ignore the errors and enjoy the story but it became irritating when I reached chapter 3. When it is edited, this would turn into an enjoyable story