Comments of chapter undefined of The Ace
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DaysideLv12Dayside
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Fair enoigh, I understand where you are coming from, but do understand that there are still two years of school left. Furrhermore, I felt as if his young age was stopping me from being able to develop certain aspects of the plot. I also feel like certain things that will happen later on, needed to feel more natural, therefore the time skip. I am sorry you did not like it however.
Dayside:You're glossing over too many important bits, and the fact that you almost entirely skipped past the school years, which are very important to a story like this is so annoying. It just feels like the story isn't fluid at all.
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