Wonderful book, with no spelling or grammar mistake whatsoever The wroldbuilding is excellent, and while it is still early, there is certainly a semblance of what is to come, whilst also keeping an air of mystery. I am really looking forward to more, and congrats on a wonderful story.
Thank you for your review! Right now, my updating stability is bad due to the amount of workload I have, but once it does reduce, I will hopefully be able to update more often.
Basically a mental DDOS attack
Tha Bald One follows me everywhere...
Fair enoigh, I understand where you are coming from, but do understand that there are still two years of school left. Furrhermore, I felt as if his young age was stopping me from being able to develop certain aspects of the plot. I also feel like certain things that will happen later on, needed to feel more natural, therefore the time skip. I am sorry you did not like it however.
I must say, your gif game is quite good.
You wrote this in Portuguese by mistake.
Thanks for the correction!
Je sais pas si tu a déjà vu, mails ils ont une page de Discord dans laquelle tu peut parler avec des mods, et des autres auteurs. Peut-être ils auront une réponse à ton problème.
Before anything, I wish to thank you for taking the time off to write this review. I guess this is probably not the thing you think of when thinking: "Well **** it, let's just pull an all-nighter.". Therefore, I want to thank you, not only for that, but also for the fact that you were fair, stating what you thought was good, and what you thought was bad. For that, again, I thank you. Now, I would like to address your points, I get what you mean, and honestly, it becomes pretty clear that at one point, I begin to share your view, which is the reason while I only make mention of him playing maybe three times, and truthfully, it has nothing to do with the story. Since then, no mention has been made of any 'real-life' people. I understand for some people, it kills the mood, but I just wanted to make sure anyone reading this is aware. Finally, as always, I am both honoured and happy that you like the story, it means a lot, and adding the fact that you were one of the first readers, and was always happy to leave a comment in each chapter, your review is particularly appreciated. I guess that's it, thank you for reading, and good luck on looking at your brother eye to eye. 👍
Thanks for the amazing review, I just started school, so the chapter updates have been a bit iffy, but they should go back to normal soon. All in all, thanks for the review, I am happy you are enjoying the novel.
Thanks for the chapter