mugen95
Hey guys! Author here. Figured I'd give myself a review. So here goes. The story is about a reincarnator who is now the son of the lost god Pan. He is normal at first but becomes really OP in the future. Hope you readers have a fun time reading it. Oh, almost forgot. The story progress slowly, but faster than the original. Enjoy. Cheers guy. Mugen Out!!
I lost brain cells reading this... I literally got a headache from reading this. The author is a child He breaks the fourth wall a lot witch is annoying after you do it 4 times The author writes like the annoying at school that just wont shut up and will keep talking to himself if no one is listening to him. I was honestly surprised that so many people actually didn't talk about that. I guess I'm one of the only people that read this fanfic and got annoyed at how childish this is. I don't know the author so I'm not going to say anything about him but I am going to say to him to please stop with the annoying commentary it's annoying and cringe.
Honestly quite good, the only thing that I don't like is the author notes/puns/fatass in the middle of the chapters . . . . ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................,..............,,..........................
Let me be honest, this is one of the few fanfics I read that weren't overrated. the story development is kind of fast but it is an awesome story nonetheless. what I suggest is trying to add some chapters following his small quests as well. the author does well with the main plot. however he can improve his book by doing something like the original author. I mean the original author forces alot on all the quests and character development while this author skips over the small quests. it was kind of stunning how quickly the main character grew strong enough to lift up the sky while only showing disconfort and dread in not being able to move. I mean, come on, percy and annabeth weren't able to hold it too long without losing all strength. however, I still believe this fanfic is awesome in it's own right. I mean, he literally added in some extra demigod powers that were not seen before. the author was abrupt though when Max met the Roman's. didn't expect that inclusion. glad there is another percy Jackson fan.
Plz keep writing this I luv the Percy Jackson series and I love the character you made and his powers and how you made pan a very interesting character with a backstory to why he’s lost so to speak also love the romance with him and thalia don’t ever want him or her to split up though or he has a harem I feel like it’ll ruin it if either of them cheat or break up for me
GIVE IT A TRY AND DON'T DROP IT! The overall quality of this novel gradually gets better from chapter to chapter. The story has always been solid from the beginning, but some may say the writing is confusing at times. Don't worry though, because it gets better later on! All I want to say is to give it a try!