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Is this from Banishers? Pretty sure Witchers don't do this, right?
Because he doesn't share their mindset.
A six year old is led into the kitchen for the first time and is given free reign to make a pizza using whatever ingredients they like best. So the child grabs some things it likes and throws them all together willy nilly and shoves it into the oven to let it bake. Fifteen minutes later, out comes a puff pastry bottom, smeared with nutella, topped with a generous amount of pepperoni and to finish it all off, a handfull of skittles. After all who doesn't want to taste the rainbow. That's exactly what we get with this story. It really seems to me like the author started writing and at every turn, whenever they had a 'cool' idea they just added it to the story. So out comes this hodgepodge of individually amazing ingredients that ultimately just don't fit together. There's definitely potential here though, some pretty cool ideas. If the author manages to flesh them out properly, I'm sure it'll be great. But for now, not my cup of tea.
Huh... that's disturbing. where's it from? I gotta watch it
How are these school subjects exactly?
vs battles
"It seems he has pushed..." it doesn't fit. It seems YOU pushed does fit
yeah, you better...
yes with Adonis
You think patience procludes you from getting angry when someone you care about dies?
Nice to see Brazil will still be EXACTLY the same a hundred years from now as it is today. That's consistency right there
No, I have not
Thee scent is supposed to become stronger once the child is aware of their lineage, so perhaps his scent is so strong because he's the child of Zeus himself that it makes the monster assume he's aware of his lineage?
dude, every spiderman self insert starts like this... way too early to make this assumption
Why even mention the big bang though? Mesozoic was 250 million years ago. The big bang was 14 Billion years ago.
"My mom and I met him the day we moved in" doesn't hint at them being neighbors so how the heck does she know?
That's a big load of bull... EVERY Pokémon has a weakness, but only an Eevee can evolve into a Sylveon. AJ's info is way more valuable