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Its interesting....The title it self must tell you why......I like it....a new style and under-developed? village,,,,plus its before cannon.....so yeh....new lore could be build and ****... Suggestion: Make MC train with the old kage [maybe a pairing with his granddaughter?] or the 4 tails jinjuriki and well learn their powers..I mean scorch style or the dust style [ which probably the most OP power in naruto atleast top 5....why? ability to destroy everything and anything to molecules and the range is large..despite load time though its not that big..author can make some BS up],,make MC anbu..stupid OP....one man army style.....add some romance and fluff..but build it......maybe save tatyua and karin.....if harem keep it small....make MC a sage of some animal...not dragon...........could be funny if he gets wood style or that BS eye from baruto that controls blood and has OP genjustsu...dude could be like aizen................dont make MC a perverted idiot..make him smart... ANyway GL...love your ****.,..just dont make it ****
not much to go on, but i'm gonna rate it like this, since the ones released are much better than those trash out here. i like his system, no shop for stupid **** like kekkais and stuff, only techniques, no signs of sentience yet, no annoying quest, only giving rewards for breakthroughs. no signs of stupid higher being intervention aside from the initial one. no wishes for stupidly many things that make no sense as to why they asked for it.