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Its interesting....The title it self must tell you why......I like it....a new style and under-developed? village,,,,plus its before cannon.....so yeh....new lore could be build and ****... Suggestion: Make MC train with the old kage [maybe a pairing with his granddaughter?] or the 4 tails jinjuriki and well learn their powers..I mean scorch style or the dust style [ which probably the most OP power in naruto atleast top 5....why? ability to destroy everything and anything to molecules and the range is large..despite load time though its not that big..author can make some BS up],,make MC anbu..stupid OP....one man army style.....add some romance and fluff..but build it......maybe save tatyua and karin.....if harem keep it small....make MC a sage of some animal...not dragon...........could be funny if he gets wood style or that BS eye from baruto that controls blood and has OP genjustsu...dude could be like aizen................dont make MC a perverted idiot..make him smart... ANyway GL...love your ****.,..just dont make it ****

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Y only 4 stars? Tell me so i can know what I’m doing wrong.

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well,..,,to get 5 stars ya gotta have either longs ass chps or gotta have something new....ex: say your story was an SI jiraya OR Nagato FF..then I'd have given you 5 stars....here its done...granted so far only 2 other stories,,,,,,,,,,,,,HOWEVER...I like it so far,,,,maybe give me like 5 long chps and I'll give 5 stars........look your **** is dope...ignore the stars

Pexxiq:Y only 4 stars? Tell me so i can know what I’m doing wrong.
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lol ok

amaturewriter:well,..,,to get 5 stars ya gotta have either longs ass chps or gotta have something new....ex: say your story was an SI jiraya OR Nagato FF..then I'd have given you 5 stars....here its done...granted so far only 2 other stories,,,,,,,,,,,,,HOWEVER...I like it so far,,,,maybe give me like 5 long chps and I'll give 5 stars........look your **** is dope...ignore the stars