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lol, what a very teenager pov.
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Dude/Dudette, this is awesome. I've been looking for stories like this ever since I've read History's Strongest Senior Brother, most haven't delivered and forgotten but you've went above and beyond. Whereas in typical cultivation novels you'd feel the transition from one arc to another till it becomes repetitive, yours doesn't. The transition is smooth and the "fillers" you put in between are very enjoyable. It's not tedious to read at all. I think I reached 197 in a day before I thought I needed a rest. However one critique I might have is the amount of characters presented. I know Xiri, Daoyi, Xia Yushan, the mother, the fox clone,the sect master and even the concealed emperor but I almost forgot about the Dragon emperor after the demon arc, what more about the other characters. Also I feel liked the plot has slowed down a bit in the demon arc but I think that's just me realizing I'm running out of chapters to read. all in all This story is solid.
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"yore"?
Yuhp, saw it when he appeared and tried to kill him. So we have the woman assassin transmigrator, Lie Jingye regressor, Longyi reincarnator,hmmm who else would be missing? maybe a system user or a cultivator from different universe.
yeah, I realized that when he appeared. So we have the woman assassin trasmigrator, Lie Jingye as a regressor, Longyi as a Reincarnator, now what trope are we missing?
dude, no need to apologize, just take your time, it's a hobby not a job
but but but... alexandra daddario. .
wait, so, freedom is running away from monsters, living in sewers, not have an inkling of training to combat said monsters? Shit, I'd rather be in that "trap", get the most training out of it and prepare for whatever shit show would come up. Well with the current options, unless a third option comes up in the future. granted i know next to nothing of Percy Jackson aside from the movies.
just face it author you just want to hit on the crazy hot bod.
good thing thiz method was not ignored, it's a popular use in fanfic
ah i see where the misunderstanding is, you thought that was a criticism?? Like whaat? those were spelling corrections. A bad criticism would be telling the writer he was a dumb fucj for mispelling a word, or suggesting he stop writing coz his story is shit, his character is shit and stuff like that. A criticism helps the writer improve his writing like suggesting alternative options on how to approach a subject, suggest better wording options for a sentence, help grmmar corrections. No my friend, what i did was not criticism, it's a helpful gesture, to help correct obvious typos and correct wrong notions on what a word would be used in a sentence. But seeing as you immediately become defensive as to being termed as a "newbie" means you do not comprehend the meaning I was trying convey in my replies. let me reiterate this again, those sort of comments are used to HELP the writer who do not have a beta, correct silly mistakes. It's not criticism. In fact, I think you're the only one who considers it a criticism. See, those sort of comments are quite common in other reading sites such as spacebattles, fanfic, etc. Where the writers and readers are interactive to create a good story. The writers have a beta to correct mistakes made by the writer before uploading it, and even if there are missed words or grammars they don't get butthurt by simple spelling corrections. In fact they appreciate it, coz it means the readers are invested in their story and they appreciate it much to give a shit to point out mistakes so others can enjoy the story as much as them. It's a BASIC COURTESY NOT a Criticism.
yeah so that it will be easier for the writer to correct those silly mistakes. as far as i know, I comment only on those really obvious typos so that the writer can just easily edit out those mistakes. What's the problem here? really, I'm confused, you're the only one I've encountered that has a problem with those. It's not annoying, it's helping the writer and in turn helping the readers. Are you a newbie in this website or fanfics/novels in general? This has always been done. Or are you equating this helpful gesture with the people in real life who just needlessly correct your grammar? This is a writing and reading website, some people come here to improve their writing skills. Like is it harming poeple or are you really just an asshole? That's why webnovel implemented the paragraph comment ability so that it's easier to correct those mistakes. I'm appalled cause really you're the only one I've encountered that has a complaint about this.
it's for the writer asshole, if you haven't notice most actually appreciate it. they don't have a beta so they need the readers to point out the silly mistakes. It's why "people always do that" in this website, to help the author improve his/her writing skills. It's basic courtesy for reading free stories. It's basically what's been done in forever with writers of fanfics. Grammar checks, spelling checks,etc.
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I'm actually curious, where did you see this? Like most fanfictions I've encountered portray him as dark(like a lot of them). I've encountered very few stories where they actually did not conform to light or dark bullshit and those i enjoyed. But i never actually encountered or remember any good Dumbledore portrayal.