Reviews of One Piece - Martialised

Hey, If anything even if you had just ruined the whole story by writing S**T plots (WHICH YOU HAVE CERTAINLY! NOT!). Just by the way the MC didn't make any female a lover already like other s**ts who straight up start the story with 1) MC arrives, 2) Becomes God(in a sense), 3)Gets a girl (IT! ONLY! HAPPENS! IN! LIKE! 10! CHAPS!). You've got me hooked up by the story. Really appreciated!.Stable update (check),Quality(check),Character design(check),No bulls**t(check). WHAT MORE DO YOU NEED ?????

Hard to read for me. Ignoring the grammar, lack of caps in several areas, and POV changes for insignificant reasons, the one thing I hate most here is the page-long paragraphs. They can easily be cut down to manageable chunks and make the story flow better. It is a slog fest to read a single paragraph and I found myself skimming a lot, which isn’t good since most of the chapter consists of long paragraphs. I can ignore grammar and cap errors (few), but when they are all crammed into 10-sentence-long paragraphs, it’s just a pain to read. 4 chapters in a dropped.

lol at first i thought this was going to be a good fanfic without the author fanboying to the strawhats but then it turned to a typical one piece novel and yes he didn't join the strawhats but he is just with yhem the whole time, it's basically him joining without really joining them the author is pretending to be a deep thinker and already planning the "BIG THING" but lol no the only thing happening so far is the mc beating up luffy's enemy while he bumps into them, that's basically the whole patern of the story so far (the mc goes to an island defeat the enemy luffy was supposed to take down and show everyone how "MIGHTY" he is and them bump into strawhats) what a fucking joke

the cover is from a game called smite.....................................................................................................................

ch 4 seems to be one of those slow pace fanfic, no hint of OP Harem or Canon story line so far --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Continue, faz tempo que não acho uma fanfic de one piece decente e essa aqui é simplesmente fantástica. Quero muito ver o futuro de Azul e quão alto ele irá nesse mundo foda que é one piece. Bem continue com o bom trabalho e tenha um ano maravilhoso hahhahahah

Its pretty good, the mc story doesn't start as op when he was younger but getting better as the story goes on to op. I like it how the mc romance is with one girl only, instead of a harem.

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This would have been a great novel by itself instead of a fanfiction but tis is the path it went so i can’t be picky about it but it’s really good so great job.

Well, well, the story is very short, the beginning is slow, but considering that 3 chapters of it give 1 of the great ones ... but anyway ... very narrative, something happens and the author goes on explaining things that happened before, you stay like: “what ?! Where is it? Did I miss something? ” I don't know how to explain the story well, but if I had to summarize it, it would be: The author tried to make a story with a long progression but got bored halfway and decided to explain things with a few lines, that's the feeling I have.

Nice story but MC to much focus strawhat,MC should create group is owned n rulling the world.thank you very much for story.

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awesome piece of work and amazing write skills and perfect fights daily updates really cant ask for more 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 !! you should also upload this work to other sites its amazing

Love it and the character to but still like it to follow the main story a bit. But overall great story and will Always want more 😍😍😍😍😍😍

Just finished binging through all the current chapters. I really like your story. You are really good at portraying the overpowered mc, deviating from canon is great, if I want to I could reread the original. Keep up the good work!

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Enjoyable as hell finally a OC one piece where I dont have to completely relive the whole one piece story all over again in an excruciatingly slow novel. However, this novel has a good enough pacing and a well structured MC that his powerful but still bot too OP and tbh his strength perfectly compliments the story written. I quite love the development of the MC and the FMC which is a nice addition to the main focus of the story. But overall I'd recommend it to any reader regardless of if they are a one piece fan.

Love it,the story is great, constant release rate,MC is just awesome, the love part is going well too,got nothing to complain about, keep up the good work man.🍺🐼

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