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yeah....old and accomplished people really love little boys telling them how the world works and that their ideology is wrong....he is just a padawan...this is gary stu at its finest...this behaviours should realistically lead to terrible punishments ....
labyrinth.....space is empty and everyonce in a while you will come across a lonely floating star or planet...
wasnt there a disrinction between jedi careers? why wouldnt they send someone specialised in negotiation? or is this a situation that requires agressive negotiation?
is his position as battlemaster canon?
good thinking
he must have a way to stop the car without causing severe collateral damage
what did he actually do? he tried to flee from being either raped or have his yang energy sucked out forcefully...he never indicated any intention to harm the girl...
hm then boe do you explain their tyranny? abolishment of chains and laws sounds like anarchy but didnt the sith strive for hegemony and founded empires? with their own laws and shackles? smells like hypocrisy
fc k around and find out. 2 year into traini g and already trying to branch out into the dark side...good idea
MC syndrome....why should he investigate? the potential consequences could be a lot worse than just being straight forward...
but this is not about his outburst but his overall force sensitivity...he could just describe it as a dark, forboding feeling and Yoda would understand what he is talking about...it feels forced especially since he is not a child anymore...
....why exactly would talking about the dark side feeling be bad in this situation? he is not responsible, he is only sensitive and he did not express any thoughts about the jedi being involved in dark stuff ... so why not mention it? is he considering himself the universal problem solver already ?
sooo is this some hatty potter style reasoning to make clans regulate their members themselves ....and what about attachments? why create these families? will they use them to get the padawan to break the attachments?
the dao of bs is strong in xianxia but appears to be eapecially strong in this universe
I am happy that it only took one chapter and maybe its the first step in the direction of something like a romance?
yeah, this chapter has so much word padding ....its starting to negatively impact the reading experience
ah yes, random words that sound profound
What a coincidence
I wholeheartedly approve of gathering your thoughts and planning ahead. too often a story rushes into an early abandonment because the author has written himself into a corner or burned himself out of muse and passion. great to see you back. maybe a little notice ahead next time would be nice