ChaosSlimeGod
The premise of the story is very good, it's one of the first reincarnation stories I've read that manages to give a credible reason for the rebirth ( with souvenir). A story in the rich Elder Scrool world can only be a good story at least from a world building point of view - respect the lore, expand it when necessary, be creative and normally your story should be great (the under exploitation of the TES universe in fanfiction is ridiculous, it's a shame that the new WEBNOVEL tag system makes searching stories much more difficult - the #skyrim tag for example doesn't exist anymore)
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Great novel. I really loved the start of the story. Word of advice: Keep up character development and add other aide characters. This is the elder scrolls universe that has a very rich lore, so dont forget to utilise this valuable asset and maybe add some original plots. Unlike other fanfics you have written especially unlike your warframe fanfic you have to make it more open world. Please. And thank you author. Good luck.
I love how you add in stuff from the entire series of the elder scrolls. I also love the character development and how he doesn't try to kiss the butt of an npc and he is making his own faction. I hope you continue to update this story and I am invested to see where this goes. Great story, only complaint I have is not enough chapters but I can understand inspiration takes time as well as you not wanting to put out a subpar chapter.