and dont be fooled, wen i originally found this page, it had no referals to the original author twubs, thats y i was so mad. so he definetly updated it soon after i posted my original review

I dont know wat u r trying to get away with plagerising this story off of twubs from fanfiction.com but u need to GTFO and not be such a BIT<H, write ur own fucking story. anhone who reads this who wants to look at the whole finished story, its called Voleur D'âme by twubs.

its alright, if u can get over how he is alwys gifted all his pokemon and all tht crap. this novel is really just something u would read to pass the time. lets just say, everything which can go right for the trainer does, and his luck is absolutely mind blowing if u know wat i mean. like how convenient. i dont like how, he sets his trainer up to be better than another si character from another fiction Alex bart. imma be real and say this dude would get smacked to hell and back if the owner of this novel made it similarily realistic as pokemon, a mystical journey