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I deeply enjoy the story, it is extremely strange and creative. The tone and grammar used are advanced and entertaining. By far the best part however is the yandere content. As a genre, there isn't as much as I would like so to see a yandere story that's well written with interesting developments, and it also is extremely different and in no way unoriginal is fantastic. The only negative point is the release schedule. Though 4-3 days per chapter is a lot better than many novels, especially for the length of these chapters. I would like to unreasonably demand a chapter a day. Or better yet, 10 chapters a day! Still, I recommend this novel if you want something interesting, unique, or with Yandere characters.
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A good story, not the best, but certainly better than the majority of things I have seen in this site. Author doesnβt make many physical descriptions(more than ten chapters in and I donβt know how the MC looks like) but I like it more than overly long and pretentious descriptions, overall Itβs a nice story that you can have fun reading without cringing every two phrases
To tell you the truth, I haven't read much. But I have certain thoughts about the specific errors I noticed from the first chapters, as well as how difficult it is to write a book on "System" - 1 - - As an author, you probably have no experience writing books on issues that get the theme of the system. It's not a problem, but when I think about the subject of the book, the book becomes complicated because the beginning is too fast and does not match your writing experience. - 2- - Extremely detailed system panels. In system-using books, it is normal to use "Status Screen". I use it myself too. However, the technique used as a classic in system books is to gradually develop the system. You, as a writer, made the status panel overly-detailed from the start. This just scares new readers that not accustomed to your book from the start. That makes a lot of people pass without reading. - 3- - "System" and "Summoner" are better to choose a simple topic and move from this topic simply as a beginning when the system starts writing the book. The summoning base is a subject that can be written as a subject of its own in the book. When both the system and the summoner are combined, the issue gets more complicated and a difficult situation is in the hands of an inexperienced writer. - 4- - End- I think you will develop as you write more - overall thank you for hard work - Oh, thank you.
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