Reviews of Return of the Monarch
Return of the Monarch
Elude
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Very interesting story, and the grammar is excellent! _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
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I gotta admit that was some quality writing you have. We'll I admire you of your writing style. I'm nowhere on your level bro! I rated the story development low 'cause there is yet to be unfolded which I do not know and eager to know in the future. Others are on a high level rate. Though I'm not into typical fantasy male lead fan, but I gotta admit these one boost potential. You only need to update frequently.
this book is god tier good. it's planed out very well and makes one want more. keep it up . also the 140 chericter limet is anoying xb .................. ............................''... .......?.'.........''........................fhnthnth ghfh fh gb gh gb gb gb gb gb gb gb gb fb sg sgb sghsgb gs sg dg gd dg dg dg gd gdeg eg gd ge gd dg ge
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honestly, MC looks kind of stupid, 25 years in another world and he commits suicide because he can't stay away from his family, but the next thing he does when he comes back is to abandon his sister, he said he felt guilty for living like a nobleman is not there to protect his family, but now he lives in search of revenge and is not there yet to support his sister.
This is good but well. The story sometimes jump too far from the current situation. Like when hes in talk with the female lead somehow apocalypse came not even give details after the talk with the girl, and i dont even know where he is when they talking and apocalypse came. And when the 3 go out room, they spot a man that love his sister and beg to join the team. And after that they appear out of nowhere and mc want to go out, i dont even know where they staying now. Please dont jump just to skip forward the timeline. Sometimes you need small details for the story
The story is great so far and I can see the plot going far, it's your usual reincarnation story, but its interesting as its set a little bit into the future and not in our current time. The only problem with I had was sometimes the writing was difficult to read, it was like they were trying to use different words to describe everything. but this might just be a personal preference. Other than that its great and I defiantly recommend people giving it a read.
