Review Detail of Rairaidani in Return of the Monarch

Item: Return of the Monarch
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

RairaidaniLv134yrRairaidani

This is good but well. The story sometimes jump too far from the current situation. Like when hes in talk with the female lead somehow apocalypse came not even give details after the talk with the girl, and i dont even know where he is when they talking and apocalypse came. And when the 3 go out room, they spot a man that love his sister and beg to join the team. And after that they appear out of nowhere and mc want to go out, i dont even know where they staying now. Please dont jump just to skip forward the timeline. Sometimes you need small details for the story

Return of the Monarch

Elude

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EludeAuthorElude

Thanks for the feedback :) The world is set in a future different from ours. Slowly, I'm planning on revealing the details of the world as the novel goes on. (I've drafted the entire arc and have it planned out.)

4yr

SimpleDeityLv3SimpleDeity

I disagree with this review. I found everything easy to picture n smooth. A modern school in a future Earth, used my imagination very easily with the info given.

4yr

RairaidaniLv13Rairaidani

Its because you use imagination, you just want to go strike the main point about story. While some of us want more logic and realistic story. Actually just give us some details about something dont suddenly jump to the point, it will make more better

SimpleDeity:I disagree with this review. I found everything easy to picture n smooth. A modern school in a future Earth, used my imagination very easily with the info given.

4yr