overloaded_maxima
Fantastic funny and awesome wish fulfillment It starts in a slightly uncomfortable tone with a bit of drama but that is quickly changed as you keep reading and changes into much more of a Gag story with the MC being OP and collecting waifus. Character development is quite well done and the harem is not unbearable huge but all key characters have their chance for development. Really interesting interactions between some characters are creatively portrayed and some have a change in personality due to certain circumstances...overall the author portrays the characters magnificently and I think you will love how he/she has written them. Also this novel is COMPLETE so you dont have to worry about a cliff hanger because all major plot points are resolved as well as the relationships. Highly recommend you stick with the novel past the initial phase because it all gets much much better and is a very funny story Just read it for the laughs and really novel characterizations!
It’s pretty bad I picked it up as a time waster the start was okay but then after five chapters I started to see a pattern where the author kept trying to make his mc “cool” which was really cringey then the sloppy seconds with irina the fact that he’s already planning on doing these five year old girls. And the “this happens” style of writing is making me mad. I couldn’t deal with this even as a time waster so, have fun?
His way too op from the start. I’m okay with being op from the start but the story is boring as ****. This is not even DXD, is like slice of life. Don’t get your hopes up cause the MC just hides and says I don’t trouble but the dude is op than great red. If you want slice of life then this is for you. MC boring as ****. This really doesn’t feel like DXD
There is no way people would let a 5yo child live without a guardian. Children below 7yo acting like 13+yo when it comes to boyfriend/girlfriend relationships. The 7yo didn’t think to use fake identity with henge for his publication and restaurant, because it’s something normal for 7yo. The leader of a supernatural faction is nerfed for damsel in distress cliché. There are limits to suspension of disbelief.
Great novel man. Like the idea of shiba tatsuya using different powers and with emotion. Overall i'll give you all 5 stars but i think you need to fix the power classification. Because i believe that 12 winged angel/fallen's equal to satan class and super class's to leader gods of pantheons like indra or hades.
Writing Quality: 3/5 Although it has some errors in writing, it does not make romance impossible to read Stability of Updates: 5/5: The story performance rate is excellent. Story Development: 1/5 The development of the story is very weak, even though passing chapters seems to have progressed to nothing. The story is quite stagnant Character Design: 1/5 Character design is just awful, both mc as the other characters have zero development. They are simply one-dimensional characters, relationships are extremely forced, the original characters act extremely different from the original versions, and that's not the problem if the author had developed the characters and showed their personality evolution, it wouldn't have this problem, but they just act that way by acting. The mc is a like a cheap copy of Mahouka's Shiba Tatsuya no Koukou Rettousei. The Shiba Tatsuya of this story has zero character development. Not to mention that girls fall in love with him almost instantly or even in the first chapter he interacts with they. World Background: 1/5 The author simply does not develop the world mc is in, even though a large part is already explained in the original work the development of the world background is zero! Bottom line: If you like to see characters without personality, it's a story that doesn't "go forward" and has zero development. Having chapters that revolve around mc do nothing and all girls fall in love with him for no reason, even though he's torturing the girl's brother in front of her. So that's your kind of story.
Minor spoilers for first few chapter of the book. that's as far as I got. This story has major problems. Problem #1: The main character starts out living alone. In a house, that people know he's alone in, at 4 years old. Problem #2: He takes over guardianship of a non-blood related cousin at the age of 6. Problem #3: MC kills multiple 4-7 year old children for talking to said cousin. Problem #4: The character at this age has every superpower known to anime or manga, and still feels the need to KILL children for TALKING to another child.(Not bullying) Problem #5: All characters main or not, are at best 2 dimensional. Most are 1, and there's no development besides, "MC now has all the cool superpowers from these 4 anime and can beat up/kill anything" periodically. Problem #6: The dimensions are off. Physical actions keep happening that make zero sense given the age and description given for the characters. There's likely many more, but I actually have given up trying to slog through this mess. This is a dream character, for a hormonal 13 year old, maybe. The story lacks depth, flavor, and most importantly, character development. The characters are "getting stronger" in ways that add nothing to the story, in fact the character is so stupidly strong there isn't even a story to tell. There's no challenges, no interest, no growth. The overpowered destruction of the first major bad guy wasn't even interesting. Even though it's free, I'd say it isn't worth the read.