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Lol Yasaka the ultimate class yokai being in need of rescue I don't why this sentence doesn't make much sense

Warning NTR, he is after grayfia, but he let her be for a couple years until milicas is born, now does he try to court her. I don't know and don't care what brain damage author has for him to like this c*ckold fet*sh There are many other instance where he let something like this happens even though he says he could eliminate an entire faction by himself because he says he's just a little bit weaker than ophis

Thanks i going to give a read cuz it has many chapters and 4☆> rating but cuz of this NTR comment I decided against to read

What are you talking about? Grayfia isn't in a relationship in this story

I haven't read this yet, but if the mc didn't have a relationship with grayfia atil after she give birth to her son, that means he didn't get cuck it really piss me off everytime I read a comment about someone saying this guy got cuck even though they don't even understand what ntr is in the first place, it doesn't matter if the mc had a plan to take grayfti for himself if he had met her and formed a relationship, and while they were together she had gotten pregnant,by someone else while being with the mc than yeah than the mc was cuck but if he never met her atil after she got married than no he wasn't cuck idiot.

Dude, I have not read this story for 5 months so i already forgot most of the story but if i said that "he's after" it means that mc have already met grayfia and have a desire as written by author to get her but even though he has "the power to decimate an entire faction" as said by author, he does nothing to make an effort courting her. After she has a daughter did the author make MC chase grayfia again. It's like author make it so that he chase the mi lf wth

No he really planned it all. I an not going to involve myself for now and wait for later after milicas is born. Dude literally planed to get a girl hes instered in pregnant by another dude. Also he loves to bait romance and get the girls stolen.

Thanks bro, i can't express it correctly in word because i forgot most of the story, now your sentences makes it clear and i remember it a bit

in the story it clearly states that grifiya doesn't have any children . their said child was not from sirzecks .sirzecks helped grifiya in that way so that his father won't chase after her to make her his concubine. auther completely changed the plot in MC favour.all harem members head over tail for MC .he even add the magician family of miyuki from irregular in dxd world

as the story progress the MC came from badass to all talk and no bite. saying that he's so strong this and that but completely beta. go with the flow.

I think the author changed it cause I went back to when he met Grayfia and it said in chapter 21 "the information that Tatsuya got was that in this world Grayfia was not Sirzechs's wife and only his 'Queen' and that Sirzechs married some other member of her clan who died giving birth to Milicas". Milicas's real mother died giving birth to him, Grayfia is his adoptive mother in this world and what Edwin_Wilson said is correct there is no Netorare and she's still a virgin. P.S. I'm typing this for people that think this has Netorare, it doesn't.

There is NO NTR in this story stop spreading misinformation from other fanfics you read Grayfia here never married and was only Sirzech’s Queen in his peerage...milicas was born to Sirzech’s dead wife

plis translate this novel to indo i want to read this novel

honestly ending was rushed author gave off ntr vibes and was waiting on greyfia to get pregnant before he chased her but due to complains changed later on for him tomfind out she just faking being Milias mother and don't get me on how he treats Irina even after she apologized. this quickly went from being one of my favorite fan fictions to one of my least favorite

This review section is very confusing

Yea man...XD I got a headache Reading this comment section..XD

same bro this shir is so confusing ill go read some chinese novel with 5k chapters and decent plot lol 🗿

Oh no 5k chapters?? 💀

according to multiple other comments Grayfia is still a virgin because Mili is not hers his mother died giving birth to him.