Suiyan
The Trolls that want this story to go a certain way should all go write their own Fan Fiction, instead of cursing at the Author! Great Chapter!
Perhaps we're miscommunicating because the original Real Troll-like comments have all been deleted, leaving mine because it wasn't evil? IDK, I really can't remember that long ago on one novels comments. I read too many novels. I also wouldn't have made the original comment like this for someone insulting the Author or me as just childlike, or for one or two minor incidents. To trigger that original comment from me, the comments probably deserved to be deleted and thus were.
Daoist_Red_Reads:But I have never seen the other comments insult the author? Except for me, not one comment who criticized the author ever insulted him here. Did you not read their comments when you commented that 7 months ago? There was no insulting remarks when they said it, only a comparison or saying that they were disappointed. Sure you can call me a troll but to call the rest of them a troll? Maybe you should read the comments here again cause you would find how wrong your comment is.
I have to say, against apparently the opinion of most here, that I didn't really find the last two chapters funny. The idea that the divine soul gained conscience and is antagonist to the main soul is utter crap in my eyes. It's like suddenly your... i dunno, left testicle got sentient and wants you to die because it was forced to descend into your ballsack and left to dangle instead of being inside your body. Or, to use another example less strange, if a newborn got sentient and suddenly resents and wants to kill its mother for getting kicked out of the womb and because the placenta was destroyed during birth.
Have you considered making the story a little more mature as it progresses because as it stands it is so stagnant. I mean it's still interesting but it's the same old story in a new place. The characters are the same no progresion in their character, sure they get stronger but when this started they were kids and now they are moving slowly to *****hood, maybe consider :/
I really don’t get all the hate. I mean Krune has been having a ridiculously easy time cultivating recently. He has been jumping realms like crazy. His laws comprehension are beyond most divine soul cultivator let alone core formation ones. And the elemental path stones are literally helping to speed up his already phenomenal cultivation speed. But he’s literally a genius of a species of highly intellectual beings with low lifespans. So it makes sense to a degree that they would improve faster. And since that’s the case I can totally understand him hitting a wall in a different manner than most. If there was no difficulty during cultivation would it really be them going against the heavens? And no, having outside problems doesn’t count as cultivation troubles. Seeing Krune struggle with his racial problems and the lifespan issue was one of the most gripping parts of the story, and while I do believe it will come back as he continues his path. Recently he’s been moving faster than ever so I’m honestly not sure when that part of the story will return. Either way I’m curious to see what happens next. Thank you for the chapter
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We expected the divine soul to be a baby..... So it having it's own sentience is no shocking news. BTW every family has some quarrels, We have the uncles n aunts, Krune has a secured job, good funds n a beautiful fiancee /wife The only thing missing was a child, which we all were so looking forward to, So I don't think there is any problem ( that big at the very least)
I don’t know why some readers are getting upset about the sentient divine soul. The author just introduced a new character, at least wait for some development before being so critical. Anyway, from my understanding, the birth of the divine soul is mostly setup for future punchlines. Bringing a child character has a lot of potential for comedy, just imagine the possible interactions between krune, light spirit and the kid.
Can all of you guys just back off the Authors back! This is not your Novel it is his. I think it is really good and funny novel. Yes i thought it was weird for another voice and the core being mother, but who knows what will happen next. Again this is the Authors story not anyone else. This novel has been great so far.