the issue i have with this story is that it is hard to follow. i cant tell if the guy who is playing Alien if he is talking or someone else. its confusing, i was hoping you give the guy who is playing Alien a name, and why are you not letting us see Alien killing all the people? i was hoping we would see more of HIM the ALIEN development. I have watched all the Alien movies and was hoping to see more gruesome stuff that they did in the movies onto this novel. I understand you cant copy all of it, but Alien was lethal creatures. Again i cant tell who is talking is it the Alien or someone else? please give the Alien a NAME..Like you did for the slime

minute ago(no period) with her, (use a comma) Mark, (use comma) Rita (no period) and Jenny. or you can say minutes ago with Mark, Rita, Jenny and I.

The only issue i have with this novel is that both mother and daughters names are practically the same name! even if you just change the way you spell the names, it is still the same name! can you please change one of their names, im getting very confused who is talking when they are all together.

im sorry but i was getting mad that i would be force to read your novel and only way to do that 3was download!!! im already paying to read and i dont want to download just to read. Plus i dont want to read on my phone. i perfer larger letters for my eyes

WARING: NEW NOVELS FORCING TO DOWNLOAD THE APPS! ALL NEW APPS ARE LETTING PEOPLE GET HOOKED WITH NEW NOVELS, THEN SAYING THE LOCKED UP CHAPTER OH IF YOU LIKE THIS NOVEL YOU MUST DOWNLOAD! NOT ONLY ARE WE PAYING TO READ A CHAPTER A DAY! I GUESS THIS COMING TO AN END FOR ME ON THIS WEBSITE....I DO NOT WANT TO READ ON MY PHONE OR DOWNLOAD SOMETHING ONTO MY COMPUTER! SO DONT GET HOOKED ON IT IF YOU DONT WANT TO DOWNLOAD

TO DOWNLOAD THE APPS! ALL NEW APPS ARE LETTING PEOPLE GET HOOKED WITH NEW NOVELS, THEN SAYING THE LOCKED UP CHAPTER OH IF YOU LIKE THIS NOVEL YOU MUST DOWNLOAD! NOT ONLY ARE WE PAYING TO READ A CHAPTER A DAY! I GUESS THIS COMING TO AN END FOR ME ON THIS WEBSITE....I DO NOT WANT TO READ ON MY PHONE OR DOWNLOAD SOMETHING ONTO MY COMPUTER

WARNING THE NEW NOVELS LIKE THIS ONE ARE FORCING PEOPLE TO DOWNLOAD THE APPS! ALL NEW APPS ARE LETTING PEOPLE GET HOOKED WITH NEW NOVELS, THEN SAYING THE LOCKED UP CHAPTER OH IF YOU LIKE THIS NOVEL YOU MUST DOWNLOAD! NOT ONLY ARE WE PAYING TO READ A CHAPTER A DAY! I GUESS THIS COMING TO AN END FOR ME ON THIS WEBSITE....I DO NOT WANT TO READ ON MY PHONE OR DOWNLOAD SOMETHING ONTO MY COMPUTER

No thank you! i will not download anything unknown apps to my computer!!! your novel was getting boring anyways

sorry i cant read this anymore! could you in the future warn people if your going lesby...

partner is assaulting her.......shes doing the same thing to mary as lucifer did! this going to turn lesb?

okay so its alright for partner to act clingy and grabbing her and she is fine with that, but lucifer cant kiss you, especially when you keep saying how handsome he is!

Can you please have Adel hold back a little! She is getting way to clingy and its getting annoying that she gets way to jealous of every little thing! Let Faith decide who she wants to be with on her own

its I didn't have a choice

I was kinda hoping he would be more solo player! he is just letting everyone take the good stuff that drops. He is to much of a pushover. It feels like its becoming a harem novel as well, one guy and bunch of women, then they all fight for him. He should be getting lots of those drops for his self which could be useful for himself, but lets the women take it (not the clothes) the items

where did you hear that! not where did you head that!

who the heck is ning???

who is Ning? you meant Alex?

im starting to hate the sister! she is too pushy

but i understand he uses it for safety, but isnt he one of the most powerful person on earth right now?

im tired of him using a mask and hiding from them! why is he still hiding