Lord_Shiva_
Haven't made a review yet, whoops. Here I go, the start is real moist, it's real greasy too, it's what you'd expect. The middle is... It's sweaty and wet, like my gf. The last part is SODDEN, it's not just wet, it's f*ucking drenched, it'sblike Niagra falls out here. That's my review of the story. I'd give it a 5/5 on the moist meter
Tis’ pretty good. Mixing so many worlds is kinda dumb though, at least take out fate it hasn’t even added anything to the story so far. And what could it really add. You already have krypton, marvel and twilight. That’s already a huge universe. You’re just making it more complicated to fit it all together in a reasonable way. Slow update sorted but I never hold that against original ffs.
A great yuri novel with strong mc . Its only problem is update stability. Let me give you an example about author . Shiva(Author): I will give those poor innocent readers a candy sweet as hell . But its a candy made from addiction !!!!!!! And when they want more they have to suffer while waiting it for months !!! Wuhahahahha!!!!
I don’t usually review something, especially a fanfic. But your story was cool and I enjoyed reading it. I really liked how you have blended the different universes into each other, if you continue like this, it will become an amazing fanfic. I didn’t give 5 stars because stability of updates and some small mistakes in writing which aren’t that important. I suggest you give the story a meaningful plot since it has a lot of potential despite being made for fun, this speaks of your high talent. Keep up the good work, thank you for the story. TheMystic