A reader who wants to read Fantasy Novels .
Ino saved from idiotness early... good .
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Well I know inoichi doting his daughter very much but if ino telled him exact conversation without misinformation then insteed of this he will do everything to convince ino not be a fangirl . Not run to hokage like 5 years old . He is not that idiot . Maybe au ?? Thought I writed this before reading after this paragraph so lets see where this is going .
So just make a clone of herself and trick others . Honestly I really wanted her to bring kurama it will be too funy :S
Well , what are you planing about the naruto x hinata scane from the previous chapter ? I mean they cant just enter the " Naah we are siblings " mod few days later and if that takes years than it will be too awkward between yuna and hinata while naruto obviously in their life . I suggest to change that scane.
Honestly just write what you want , dont change what you planned just bc of comments . Suggetions obviously okay thought .
I suggest leave hinata for naruto if they are like that already and honestly I dont think I wanna see sharing harem with naruto even for just one member . Your book thought.