Demonic_angel
Demonic_angel:I already inserted a sword he'll use in the future in story, will be tough changing it
I’m disappointed in the lack of descriptions in the battle, just saying stuff like ‘he used the second form of whatever martial skill’ to injure the beast. Is not enough for me to be able to visualise the fight scenes, I know this is the first ‘real’ battle that you have written but I genuinely hope that it gets better.