This novel has really come together well. The MC gives very wholesome and real feelings, his mental and emotional conflict is not a one time thing and allows us to understand him and enjoy the novel more. The ML is also quite refreshing, although he does seem to be quite a regular ML at the beginning and still has very similar traits to other ML's,I still somehow like him. So far the novel is moving at a steady pace. Although there are alright grammatical errors here and there, and sometimes confusing sentence structures it doesn't take away from how enjoyable this novel is and the feeling that the author is putting in their very best to make the novel enjoyable for readers. Thank you so far for a great novel, keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the rest of this. 😣♥️😊

So far this novel is interesting. Can't wait to see how the MC plays in the next world's 😂😏😻