Reviews of Diary of a Fox

I love the way you right, deff kept my interest with the back and forth chatter, but interactions or how people interact with the fox should be considered in the future. As you said it can understand actions well so try in corporate that if you can and keep growing as a wrighter cause it's very captivating. Options from my thoughts Have the fox move more explore the world as it's getting very repetitive of him sleeping Have some progress on the combos of lighting and blood like he can move the blood somewhat after shocking Have a scary encounter where he shows his true form changing somone and learning something or saving the guy over reputations Hope this helped keep it up cause DAM its good

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This is a good story and only gets ranked low for me because of the few grammatical errors but even I make those mistakes and thus is where an editor can come in handy. As for posting speed the author has already stated that they wish they could post quicker but I’d take the sacrifice of a delayed post for good content any day. The character development and story flow are well designed and laid out but it could really do with a bit more world building. Either as a prologue or just slipped into the story in flashback or little bits of history lessons from time to time. Like what don’t the beasts and humans get along? What is the cast (or ruling) system of the land? Is this one giant kingdom or many realms complained in a time of peace? It never hurts to build the word in which your characters will live in. Bu don’t let this turn you away from this book it is a good story and sees to get better with each new realest.