Review Detail of ShadowFoxx89 in Diary of a Fox

This is a good story and only gets ranked low for me because of the few grammatical errors but even I make those mistakes and thus is where an editor can come in handy. As for posting speed the author has already stated that they wish they could post quicker but I’d take the sacrifice of a delayed post for good content any day. The character development and story flow are well designed and laid out but it could really do with a bit more world building. Either as a prologue or just slipped into the story in flashback or little bits of history lessons from time to time. Like what don’t the beasts and humans get along? What is the cast (or ruling) system of the land? Is this one giant kingdom or many realms complained in a time of peace? It never hurts to build the word in which your characters will live in. Bu don’t let this turn you away from this book it is a good story and sees to get better with each new realest.