Review Detail of Johnathan_Fields in Diary of a Fox

I love the way you right, deff kept my interest with the back and forth chatter, but interactions or how people interact with the fox should be considered in the future. As you said it can understand actions well so try in corporate that if you can and keep growing as a wrighter cause it's very captivating. Options from my thoughts Have the fox move more explore the world as it's getting very repetitive of him sleeping Have some progress on the combos of lighting and blood like he can move the blood somewhat after shocking Have a scary encounter where he shows his true form changing somone and learning something or saving the guy over reputations Hope this helped keep it up cause DAM its good