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Aysel_Inara

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Gold_Paper_Crane
Gold_Paper_CraneLv10Gold_Paper_Crane

I have been following this story closely for the past few weeks and I am genuinely pleased. It was not your usual romance story, for it was also infused with fantasy which kept it interesting and mysterious! ML (or I hope he is) - He was not your perfect ML, but my advice to fellow readers to not give up and kept reading. I hope Author can promise a happy ending here 😆 Love scene (a.k.a sex) - I have read Author's other one shot, which was really good. So I don't have any comment on this one. It was described in a very beautiful way, without losing the essence of the whole storyline. Steamy and sexy at the same time. Overall, I am having a good time and declare myself as one of your readers. I am definitely waiting patiently for your next chapters. ♥️♥️♥️

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dumdum007
dumdum007Lv5dumdum007

Definitely something new to read which I absolutely love. The elaboration of characters and world background is done pretty well. You can just close your eyes and visit the kingdom yourself. ♥️ So far, a good job!😊 Keep it up dear author!👍 ♥️♥️♥️♥️

May1st
May1stLv14May1st

I haven't read much, but so far; i love the flow of the story. Nice introduction and an excellent use of English words. I strongly recommend this, check it out; if you wanna read something slightly different and refreshing. It's worth it. Nice work author. And damn! Your grammar wows me. I'm gonna keep following this.

summya789
summya789Lv2summya789

Actually i was literally doing everything to get this novel even though i search on every website and ended here just because of few paragraphs you uploaded and they really touched the deepness of my heart . This is a great novel ang also eye catchin hope people appreciate your work and effort

Nikkybrien270
Nikkybrien270Lv4Nikkybrien270

Though I haven't read the main story but base on the synopsis, Great work and it's really interesting. I will try and read it whenever I'm chance because I like anything that revolves with romance

Henrique_Paiao
Henrique_PaiaoLv6Henrique_Paiao

Exp 😉😙😌😉😙😌😉😎🤔😉😃🤔😙🤔😋🤔😆🤣😘😆 😘☺️😀☺️☺️🤔😍🙂☺️😅🤣😄😆😋😙🤣😘😙🤣😉😎🤔😉😎😗😋🤔😙🤔😙🤔😙🤔😎😗😎😆😋😙🤣😄😙😃😂😅😉😎😗😃😂😚😆🤣😄😚☺️🤗🤗😚☺️😅🤣😙🤣😉😎🤔😍🙂

Que123456
Que123456Lv13Que123456

I really like this story. Vivid storytelling. I hope more ppl read n support this interesting book. Cant wait for the story to develop more.

The_Canary
The_CanaryLv4The_Canary

After reading six chapters, I have to say that the whole world is intriguing. The townpeople are the worst. I just want to honestly say that the pacing is a bit slow. Overall, I like the story!

Xiao_Zuojia
Xiao_ZuojiaLv3Xiao_Zuojia

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Kamlyn
KamlynLv14Kamlyn

Okay, so I haven't read it yet. But the poster is already making me interested in it. And it's synopsis is quite mysterious and can't guess what there will be. BUT not a clique` romance, it's different from my preferred romance stories, but I am up for new readings. I loved how the author has kept it mysterious and interesting.

blanketskies
blanketskiesLv2blanketskies

This is a world-building novel. This story requires a reader to build up concentration and imagine the scenes in their head. If one is just here for a quick read, very unlikely you would find this enjoyable. As a world-building writer myself. I enjoyed it. I think the grammars are alright to breeze through, I didn't think it affected the reading experience. This is a sexual/erotic content kind of novel. I don't mind it at all. :)

xlntz
xlntzLv14xlntz

Well written. Good story. It has a lot of potential. I've also read your other novel and I can see that you've really improved in your writing quality. Excellent work. Keep it up. Your readers now just need a stable updates. 😅

Tim_Saian
Tim_SaianLv11Tim_Saian

I really don't know what else to say. The world is so brilliantly fleshed out you find no stress picturing yourself as a bystander, a courtier or even one of the characters. Updates come as promised, which is more than I can say for some romance authors. And the development of the story goes at a delicate but really smooth pace. You get that cliffhanger right where you need it. Its a hook.

Gery_
Gery_Lv14Gery_

I read it and I like it so far. The way you demonstrate the characters and the background it has a unique flow int it. The only flaw I see maybe the few update, but it's on purpose to make the reader wanting more and more! It's a Great one!👌

ElleJaye
ElleJayeLv4ElleJaye

Love how its a little bit erotic and then gore at the same time. XD It surely is interesting to read. Plot and characters are well written. Can't wait to read for more! Keep it up! :D (review trade)

Peachwoodgirl6
Peachwoodgirl6Lv5Peachwoodgirl6

I really liked the story so far. Development is good. What I liked the most is the thought process of the author because the story has clarity. It is a well written novel. Keep up the good work.

RandomGuy
RandomGuyLv4RandomGuy

Hey! Your work is great! It's nice story, keep up with the good job, author! 😊 I make a story too so pls check it out and give it some reviews and stars later! 😊 Mine's : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705

Ak02
Ak02Lv12Ak02

Awesome story. Aysel. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

MizA
MizALv10MizA

As the story develops and you get acquainted, so to speak, with the characters, the first impression confirms itself: the author knows how to manage the chapters. Also, he/she knows how conduct the flow of events, knows how to create good characters, and once you get used to this prose style, that is... *Très chic!* you'll feel immerse in this unique narrative. I believe bit everyone will appreciate the subtleness or how the story is detailed, but I really do. Interestingly, the first chapters didn't prepare you for what comes next, and I'm glad the author doesn't throw the whole plot in your face in the first two pages and keep beating it as a dirty carpet for the duration of the novel. It's on my library and I'm awaiting for more OMG moments. If you like fantasy with convoluted plotlines, well written characters, descritive scenes and subtle humor, this is the novel you want to read next.

Har_V
Har_VLv14Har_V

I barely write reviews but this one is really good. A whole different story when compared to usual stories. This author has excellent English skills and everything is depicted well. When it comes to story...I am genuinely pleased. I hope FL gets more stronger and powerful.