Ms_Magician
I do love the story in general and it builds up quite well. As someone who enjoys observing human minds from a far, i do appreciate this story. But i did find it bothering how the new sentences weren't seperated from each other. For example.like this.do you see how the sentences.arent seperated from the.dots.? Maybe its a hogwarts thing, i'm not to aware of the series but that was the only problem on the story i saw so far. Also, the stories are a bit to long. Maybe aim 1.5k a chapter. A lot of popular novels seem to be doing it.
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It's still too early for me to decide and give star, but I'll give 5 stars for now, because I like the title and concept of it The tag for this story : - Male Protagonist - Manipulative Protagonist - Transmigration into a book - Time skip - Sarcastic protagonist - Calm and smart protagonist - Schemes and conspiracies (I guess? too early for that. But it's probably gonna have it) If you're harry potter fans, and you like this kind of tags, than maybe you'll like this As a fellow reader and fellow harry potter fans, I am quite satisfied with the current chapters I hope author won't drop it π» ^_^