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Ms_Magician
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Hello my readers!Author here.I shamelessly give myself five stars. I give my heartfelt gratitude for all those who read this and support me. Give your opinion in the comments section and vote if you like the story. Thanks for reading.

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MisterE05
MisterE05Lv4MisterE05

I do love the story in general and it builds up quite well. As someone who enjoys observing human minds from a far, i do appreciate this story. But i did find it bothering how the new sentences weren't seperated from each other. For example.like this.do you see how the sentences.arent seperated from the.dots.? Maybe its a hogwarts thing, i'm not to aware of the series but that was the only problem on the story i saw so far. Also, the stories are a bit to long. Maybe aim 1.5k a chapter. A lot of popular novels seem to be doing it.

alesjandritos
alesjandritosLv4alesjandritos

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arcanamoth
arcanamothLv3arcanamoth

So this review is supposed to be 140 letters long but I just want to say that this story is really interesting and the way the main character is determined to be at the top makes his way up by using others for his own goal is quiet unique plot

prince7777
prince7777Lv5prince7777

This is a really good story with nice plot coming along pls keep up the good work🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

SpicyChickenNo1
SpicyChickenNo1Lv10SpicyChickenNo1

It's still too early for me to decide and give star, but I'll give 5 stars for now, because I like the title and concept of it The tag for this story : - Male Protagonist - Manipulative Protagonist - Transmigration into a book - Time skip - Sarcastic protagonist - Calm and smart protagonist - Schemes and conspiracies (I guess? too early for that. But it's probably gonna have it) If you're harry potter fans, and you like this kind of tags, than maybe you'll like this As a fellow reader and fellow harry potter fans, I am quite satisfied with the current chapters I hope author won't drop it 🍻 ^_^

tomaz
tomazLv5tomaz

Reveal spoiler

grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv14grimmhorizon

id like to give you 5 stars but since their are no chapters to read and consider this click-bait you get 0 stars from me,( screw this website for not allowing that)

Kittens_are_cuter
Kittens_are_cuterLv4Kittens_are_cuter

I really love the story . MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

dablusloth
dabluslothLv4dablusloth

Pretty....................................................... good ........................................................job...........................................................so far.................

SaNem
SaNemLv4SaNem

Romantic love story with gud story line☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ simply I like itπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€mainly the emperor luc..he is like a prince from fairy tale..

John_Paul_Reyes
John_Paul_ReyesLv4John_Paul_Reyes

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colin45
colin45Lv3colin45

please write more I like evil MC. Finaly a OP evil MC I can dig. Sadly Immortaly is overated but evil empire Palpy ways sound more fun to write about. so more world building please.

Monique_Gomez_5316
Monique_Gomez_5316Lv1Monique_Gomez_5316

I loved it if only there were more chapters cause I am literally in love with this fanfic πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€”.plz do what you doπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„. like seriously this is a amazing fanfic. This is the kind of fanfic I have been looking for for a long time