Review Detail of MisterE05 in Deleted (deleted) 212122

I do love the story in general and it builds up quite well. As someone who enjoys observing human minds from a far, i do appreciate this story. But i did find it bothering how the new sentences weren't seperated from each other. For example.like this.do you see how the sentences.arent seperated from the.dots.? Maybe its a hogwarts thing, i'm not to aware of the series but that was the only problem on the story i saw so far. Also, the stories are a bit to long. Maybe aim 1.5k a chapter. A lot of popular novels seem to be doing it.