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The novel is very interesting although it may seem a little too fast paced for some. While the novel could use some work (as no story is perfect right of the bat), I enjoy reading the novel as it doesn't have the cliche storyline of an assassin or a similar character dying and transmigrating, vowing revenge, falling for an obsessed and domineering overpowered male lead, etc. Not that I don't enjoy those novels, it's just after a while, it becomes repetitive. The is a good novel to read if you're looking for a change of pace.
I personally really like this novel!!! It's not perfect but it's still really good and I really recommend it!! The mc is absolutely adorable and I love that she isn't someone weak who has to rely on others. Thank you author for working hard on writing this story. It's one of my top rated original novels for sure.
Really love how the story develops. Love the plot of how the FL grows stronger day by day, even if she seems to be a bit dense when it comes to affection. But then, that's understandable if one read through to what had happened to her. However, too much POV can be confusing. Structure is good but at times, it is confusing as well. But I'm still looking forward to more chapters. ❤️❤️❤️
I truly love this novel. I find it such an interesting story. The FL and the ML have such a beautiful story and love, it truly makes it a great novel. This novel is one of my favorites in my library and constantly check to see if it has updated. The author has done such a great job so far and I appreciate all the chapters they have written and updated. They are amazing👍❤️
A little fast-paced but very fascinating. I like how the story directly jumps into the plot at the beginning which is actually enjoyable for me. If I were to give a small suggestion, it would be some small grammar mistakes that should be fixed later on but other than that, this is like a hidden gem. Hope this gets more reviews and lasts for a while! 💎
I could only really rate two categories, writing and s tr ability of updates, as I only read one chapter, though I did skip ahead to the last free chapter to see if the writing improved. It is definitely not the worst writing I have seen on webnovel, but it needs work. For one, the dialogue is written like a screenplay, not a novel( i.e. Guard: "Halt! Who goes there?") It is written in past tense, but a few paragraphs swap to present tense every now and then. In addition, words are missing at times which can hurt reading as your brain tries to figure out what word is missing. A missing word here and there happens to everyone, but there were multiple instances in a single chapter. And according to the quote on the title page the first three chapters had been edited as well, which should have caught most of these. I only skimmed chapter 197, mostly to see if the dialogue was still written the same, so I cannot comment on if the writing and editing improves later. I can't comment on character development, world building or plot since, as I said, I only read one chapter, but it does seem like the author is fairly consistent on posting chapters, so I applaud them on that. The story is probably pretty good judging by the other reviews and the chapter comments I looked at, so if you can ignore the weird dialogue and need for a bit more editing it could be a real diamond in the rough. Edit: I had to rate the other categories to post this review, but I don't know anything about them, so I gave them all three stars. I apologize if the novel should be rated higher for them, I couldn't justify giving a high or low number of stars without reading it. I wish I could have left them empty. I hope to not discourage the author, I admire anyone able to stick with their story, I just can't enjoy it in the current state.