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TheTalkingCupcake
TheTalkingCupcakeLv114yrTheTalkingCupcake

Really love how the story develops. Love the plot of how the FL grows stronger day by day, even if she seems to be a bit dense when it comes to affection. But then, that's understandable if one read through to what had happened to her. However, too much POV can be confusing. Structure is good but at times, it is confusing as well. But I'm still looking forward to more chapters. ❤️❤️❤️

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Incarnation of Gods: Endless War

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Thank you so much for the advice. I will try to improve as much as i can. (シ_ _)シ (o´▽`o)ノ

TheTalkingCupcake
TheTalkingCupcakeLv11TheTalkingCupcake

😍😍 Yes, you are improving day by day