Reviews of Wandless - A Harry Potter Fanfic
Wandless - A Harry Potter Fanfic
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Going be a bit shameless and give myself five stars. Deal with it. I just wanted to say something to those who want to review my work. Criticism is accepted if there are reasons and tips on how to improve. If possible, don't review just because you want exp or hate on it without reason. Try to review what it is that you liked or disliked about the story. I see this done to a lot of other people's stories and I guess I just want to know what I did well and what might have been a mistake. If someone comments about what I should do or what I should take out of the story I probably won't listen to it since, as it's my story, I do whatever I want with it. This story was made to improve myself and see how far my writing can take me. Not to create the perfect story (Although that sounds good) Some may like it, some may drop it. But if you decide to give it a go, thanks in advance. Thank you for reading my story, and I hope to see you guys again.
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Compared to most HP fics on this site this one might be considered decent, but overall it's really mediocre. The premise sounds fresh if anything - the story about muggle boy in HP world? Sounds interesting, right? Unfortunately, it becomes a stupid cliche in the very first chapter. So our MC is a street rat, and despite having no one to care for, and no one to care for him, he's still some paragon of morality - I mean he jumped on some thugs to save some random old man from being mugged, and then becomes a vigilante hunting ex-military drug dealers (***** people) at the prime age of 13. And of course - during all this time the police and everyone else can't really find this average boy, who's been doing their job for them for years. I know it's only a fic and so on, but I just can't take all of this ridiculousness
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its quite good, has good potential, keep up the good work author --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
One of the best Harry Potter fanfiction I ever read.. There's not many HP fanfic whose MC is muggle, but can go to Hogwarts (there's not many subject MC/Vincent can learn).. So, I can say it's new, fresh, interesting story line... I really really really love it 😍😍😍 Can't wait to see next chapter 😁😁👍👍👍
