Which was what, 4 short chapters? It was to be expected, I guess, but it's still disappointing

so he meant it literally? I thought it was some kind of metaphore for Harry becoming subservient or something. TBH., I liked Harry more after that incident.

How can you say he's not violent? I mean, his proficiency with dark arts and his willingness to use it not only to protect himself, but in practice as well, we saw him torture a frog when he learned his brother was in danger because of Neville. And spur of a moment? He had to set up the meeting, no? But even if that's the case, then how is it showing Harry being in control? Now about the animagi, I guess it's true they can just check that, but they would have to do that in the first place. As I said, I doubt people check it on day-to-day basis. And I truly doubt Harry would disrespect Calypso by excluding her from whatever dangerous activity he had planned for himself because he didn't want to put her in danger.

your big moment. If I remember, this is where original story ended.

I'd love to see it

I didn't know there were any WoD fics. Do you know any others?

yeah, it's not chapter written by this guy. He took original story, and cut its chapters into multiple pieces, and I don't like that it's not mentioned anywhere. Everything posted until now is just copy and pasted version of someone else's work, supposedly with a few small changes. If I remember correctly, the original story ended after the first task, so there's a few more chapters to go.

wdym he got whipped?

if there was one thing you could have changed from original this was it. Having him stuck on the sidelines is going to suck. That is, if you have any original chapters ready.

I really hope you have some original content ready, seeing that we're almost at the end of Santi's work

The story is the same, so changing a few sentences here and there is not impressive. If there are any significant changes then feel free to point them out. He said it's not his, but he didn't give credit to original author - no link, no mention of his name, nothing. Also, he said that there were 12+8 original chapters posted, which gives the impression that the copied content is but a fraction of this story, which is not the case. He just cut those chapters into tiny pieces, which is deceitful at best. And if you want some decent HP fanfic, then you're better off asking for them on forums or subreddits dedicated to HP, instead of waiting for someone to rip off someone's story and post it here.

the title is the same, and author is The Santi. You'll find his story on ff. net and on darklordpotter, I think. The title is the same

so far it's copy and pasted story of another author, so you shouldn't thank this guy yet

yeah...

shouldn't he see the castle from Hogsmeade?

why not just say ''teach me or I won't help you"? he treats this as if it was some secret knowledge

what

what, Severus has trouble with Experialmus spell? :D

how does he know this? I'm pretty sure it's a fanfic idea, so why would he believe it? he didn't buy into ' master of death' thing from ff

like a boss