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Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth : Traversing the Myriad Planes

Pey2003
Pey2003Lv5Pey2003

I gotta say, that farewell with his parents could have been done better. Their actions and the emotions they showed were stiff and very unnatural. Well this is only the beginning and I could give it a bit of leeway.

Webzayne
WebzayneLv11Webzayne

This chapter kills all suspension for the novel. It would be best if this chapter was never made, at least not in this way...

Seud
SeudLv4Seud

The **** was this? It’s weird how accepting the parents were of the situation, the beginning of the chapter was good and the part where the mc was an orb of light was ok. Then the part where the parents could see him was weird. Finally the part where they conversed with “God” was just plain fucking stupid. You must’ve gone full retard when thinking about how to plan out this chapter, lmao.

NP_3228
NP_3228Lv5NP_3228

thats fking weird.

MagicSand
MagicSandLv6MagicSand

My feeling after reading the chapter = 'weird'

equinotic
equinoticLv13equinotic

Would've preferred there to not be a meeting with the god at the very least. It did not feel or look right at all. Thanks for the chapter.

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

This got a bit weird but still good chapter.

Zawad_Alvee
Zawad_AlveeLv4Zawad_Alvee

First.... A god doesnt need to explain cuz, he is a GOD 😶 I can feel that you wanna showcase a lot of things . But sometimes you should let the readers to their own imagination . Overall dont explain everything .

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6Chunchunmaru_sama

cringing

ghost_kuro
ghost_kuroLv1ghost_kuro

sigh , another girlish system lol ... so cringe why must system talk. do computers talks?lol.. if it did i doubt it will remain loyal and blackmail you with specifics websites.. ahhahaxD

Fausto_Neto
Fausto_NetoLv1Fausto_Neto

that's why they put the protagonist orphaned or with family problems because it was kind of ridiculous, except for the fact that they accepted it too fast, which seems that they didn't even like him, even if they hated him, it is still ridiculous they accepted that a god who ta above everyone to go down to explain where their son went, like he could send an angel it was already incredible, and they accepted it as if it happened every day, and you still gave the excuse that and why they like supernatural ?????? ????????????

Stephen_Lobo
Stephen_LoboLv4Stephen_Lobo

It's too fucking fucking wierd but nonetheless I'm laughing my ass off🤣🤣😂😂😂🤣😂😂 Hats off!! to the author

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

DevilsArray
DevilsArrayLv5DevilsArray

Super cringy. Not needed. Still nice imagination

CHAOS
CHAOSLv11CHAOS

Wow, this chap should’ve been put on hold, like seriously do you know what a God is? Especially if a god descended to the mortal world do you know what happens? But this is a Nobel but there still has to be stuff that is like you know...uhhh.....I forgot the word haha. Welp im sigining out~

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

LOL, the God come out and explain that he pick their child as receiver of his system...

Kenjihayamura
KenjihayamuraLv11Kenjihayamura

Ughhh, how to say it, I feel CRINGE just reading this 1st chapter

Akatsuki_3559
Akatsuki_3559Lv4Akatsuki_3559

they understand the situation too much, no?

Ciel_Best_Waifu
Ciel_Best_WaifuLv13Ciel_Best_Waifu

Ich weiß nicht wie es euch geht aber 1 akzeptieren die Eltern sehr schnell das ihr Sohn tot ist und 2bin ich Artist

ARIO_VANISH
ARIO_VANISHLv5ARIO_VANISH

pfft

Edgelord_Sadboi
Edgelord_SadboiLv4Edgelord_Sadboi

well that was a lot. I don't have a problem with it though. The parents seem nice, I hope they make an appearance again at some point