AidenCanis
A sub-par harry potter fanfiction, but enjoyable anyway. There is a lot of problem in this story (too many to list them all) but it is normal as it's the first story of the author. It's frustrating because the story could have been so much better that what it is actually. If you like HP FF give it a try, you could be surprised.
The dialogue between characters is so flat. Other characters are so one dimensional that it's ridiculous. Having the characters respond back without any emotion doesn't help. (You need to use question marks to end sentences that are questions. Without doing that, it really throws off the flow of the story.) I hope you work on your character development as I like the plot of the story.
This is one of the best Harry Potter fan-fiction you will read. I can only think of one other that is as well done. Author has an AMAZING stamina level as he pumps out at least 2 chapters a day. Also were most focus on the MCs time in school, Author will soon be focusing on the time after. Which is extremely rare for a fanfic to get to.
Seriously a hidden gem not found anywhere else. Since this story concentrate on the MC than basing on the Boy-who-lived. Not being the sidekick or the canon fodder helping the brat. This is truly a fanfic that visualized the epitome of an OC and more likeable not being along with a dupe canon protagonist and more beyond that.