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Reviews of Immortal Monarch (XMen)

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Immortal Monarch (XMen)

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EternalBliss4U
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This Story takes place after the war and in this Naruto decided to take harsh steps towards people that enjoy causing chaos, If you have followed Boruto than this story adds in things from Boruto and the main enemy is the Otsutsuki King. Naruto and the world has developed fast and efficiently unlike the anime where the main character can't have this move set because it makes fights easier. You know like, why didn't Naruto learn atomic dismantling or lightning armor when he can do it easily. Here no nerf for Naruto and his powers are pushed to the extreme. A decade has passed since the war and Naruto decided instead of waiting for his enemies to come, he would go to them. The Otsutsuki's main force lives in the Marvel universe and Naruto on arrival notices great potential in the locals, and decides to use them for the future fight. Helping the locals while checking the region, Naruto prepares for the fight against his nemesis along with his wife. Naruto is op without a doubt since his abilities have been trained to the extreme using shadow clone, meaning thousands of years. But he won't one shot everyone and there will be struggles. It has a harem. Jean Grey, Hinata, Rogue confirmed At least 4 girls max six and it depends on the story as everyone needs a proper role. Naruto's personality is playful and wise even though some times he comes of as arrogant and controlling. It focuses on the issues of the XMen, Thor, Avengers, Fantastic four so it has mash up of their plot lines. The power levels for all these characters are from the comics and not from the animated shows since anime makes them a lot weaker.

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hairan66
hairan66Lv2hairan66

I am speechless, this story is very good I strongly recommend. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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ViniDrako23
ViniDrako23Lv4ViniDrako23

I Love Harem, this ff is soo good @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

RoRi
RoRiLv13RoRi

AMAZING STORY!!!! Guys if you read this review before adding it to your library and giving it chance, go for it! This story is really brilliant, I never saw better Naruto x Marvel story, I most of them drop by the time although I wanted so much to read some good story with Naruto in Marvel but I just somehow totally lost interest to read more of it. But this story is different! Grammar is exceptional and aspect of story too. The only thing I could imagine wouldn't be here is harem BUT! To my surprise it really didn't matter to me in this story. Read it and you would see for yourself. Author please continue with this story and don't drop it. You are doing amazing work!:)

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

This fanfic is covering many characters, so far more Marvel than Naruto. It's deeper individual explorations obviously are Naruto with his closest people no matter their universe of origin. The developments are timely, not slow or quick. Per characters' situations how things evolve are viable. As a fantasy novel there's plenty to enjoy while staying true to these multiverses natural laws when the author extends out probable next steps in paths being traversed. I gotta go read now.

Hora_Do_Mori
Hora_Do_MoriLv3Hora_Do_Mori

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Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2Nafsu_geass28

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

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Riekoo
RiekooLv4Riekoo

it was good but it got dropped sadly [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Ken_Uzumaki
Ken_UzumakiLv3Ken_Uzumaki

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Enigmation
EnigmationLv4Enigmation

Thank you author for this story! Thoroughly enjoying it so far. I like that you didn't make other supporting characters 2D but actually gave thoughtful monologues and emotions. If suddenly every girl falls in love with Naruto is silly but Naruto actually giving them attention and care and showing it is refreshing.(Maybe I've been reading too many silly harem novels, idk). One thing though, the plot seems to be moving a little bit slow but other than that, I see no glaring issue. Take your time and write a story you want to write. We are here awaiting your story!

JManM
JManMLv5JManM

I like your version of Naruto in this. Not sure if he is a good enough character to keep me interested for long, but I intend to at least finish what you have here and try some of your other works.

TigerOfTheWest
TigerOfTheWestLv14TigerOfTheWest

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_MCkekskuchen_
_MCkekskuchen_Lv5_MCkekskuchen_

Pretty good fanfic sometimes there are typos but who cares. ................................................................................

Deadrule_vivek
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BrownOptometrist
BrownOptometristLv11BrownOptometrist

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stefanus101
stefanus101Lv14stefanus101

i like this side of naruto,im looking forward for more releases soon,coz it is that good keep writing and stay safe!!!! and please pace yourself coz i see how many work you are doing,n if u dont pace urself ur going to be burnt out mate

SufferJustLikeMe
SufferJustLikeMeLv4SufferJustLikeMe

Why no one's reading this gem! although I hate Hero complex but this book is an exception! good harem that make sense! good choice for the girls! So read this guys! donate powerstones to get to the top and to make good reviews so the author can dump all the chapter he! currently had!

FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.