With great power comes great responsibility but Peter had never imagined getting in contact such power. Disclaimer: I do not own anything
This is surprisingly good, especially considering we're on webnovel, but it could hold it's own on more serious sites as well. My one and only gripe so far is the Xianxia or I guess they might be Chinese wording sometimes. Grammar and sentence structure are actually pretty good but the occasional Chinese wording really detracts from the story. A good example would be Jess saying something like "Don't you want to enjoy greater things?" when referring to ***. I'm guessing it's more or less a 1 to 1 translation and it really doesn't flow well. This also makes the conversations the characters have to feel very stilted or just plain weird and out of place whenever it comes up. Honestly, my one suggestion to the author would be to read more English literature or even fanfics from other sites, not webnovel, so he can get the hang of English idioms and a better way to word things rather than the current 1 to 1 translation. Maybe try posting your fics on QQ and FFnet or if you never plan to add actual *** scenes then SV and SB. People will likely help you more with this issue there.
Reveal spoiler
Let's start with the world, its Marvel so its bound to be interesting with the large amount of characters and possible story arcs in the comics. In terms of character, the MC is pretty much Peter with a grandpa system AKA Naruto, which I find is pretty good as the author made Naruto wiser and more powerful(I believe he ranks among the low/mid-level of top tier Marvel characters). As for the side characters, the author might want to expand more of their stories instead of info-dumping though. In terms of the plot, its slowly building up from what I've read so far but we'll see as more chps are released. The writing quality is good and no major mistake so far.