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Reviews of A Hero's Multiverse

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A Hero's Multiverse

Zibarn

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  • Writing Quality
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  • Story Development
  • Character Design
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Im_Sweepy
Im_SweepyLv4Im_Sweepy

2nd review. I just wanted to add that this novel is very sloppily done. The storyline is hard to follow, the grammar is somewhat readable but honestly, I could barely follow the story. I honestly don't think the author proofreads his chapters before publishing them. The story itself could of had a lot of potential like most fanfics do but the author's execution caused it to fail. There are many positive feedbacks so I assume I'm being too picky but I honestly don't recommend reading this unless you're looking for a novel that is done half-assed and will probably be dropped if the author doesn't start improving his quality of writing.

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CH405Kaiser
CH405KaiserLv6CH405Kaiser

Reveal spoiler

DJason
DJasonLv15DJason

Eh writing quality. Stability is good SO FAR. Story development, actual garbage. What is even happening? Character design? Good! Only for deadpool tho :D World background, horrible integrated into this multiverse.

Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv6Enlightened_Being

very bad character design, everything is like a joke, the MC is very stupid and piss all over everything and doesn't know how to behave or take care of himself like a baby being led by nose by everyone with a candy, first Batman has to babysit him and then Deadpool and SHIELD and so on, talk about destiny the most powerful superhero become someone lacky and an intern SHIELD member, disappointment after disappointment, the funniest part is being captured by Black Widow, a God got capture by a mortal.

WorthlessDaoist
WorthlessDaoistLv4WorthlessDaoist

Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't Don't drop this! this! Fucking Harem

MrPassionate
MrPassionateLv3MrPassionate

There are too many flaws in the story and writing. Dropped.🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️

AJXSJS
AJXSJSLv4AJXSJS

I haven't read this but I see Supergirl and Powergirl in the picture does he hook up with them? Yes I realise what that would mean but, Powergirl seems worth it. Also why is it that I hate Superman but I'm fine if not an outright fan of everyone else in his bloodline?

Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5Inmortal_Dog

One Word for your novel, Bull****, so bull****. I'am sorry author, but your novel is a bull****. The mc is a idiot and and if it's because he has a script, I do not even notice it, the story can follow the mc would not matter in the most.

CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6CliffkunLolRekt

So fucking good more plssss and by the cover its going to be a harem fuuuuggggg yyaaa Serously man 3 chaps and I’m already hooked I want more lol you deserve the 5 stars

DeityDragon
DeityDragonLv7DeityDragon

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DeadEye12
DeadEye12Lv15DeadEye12

Another fanfic that ignores the personality of the characters and doesn't understand any of the characters they write about. Just another story of all the female heroes of different universes instantly falling in love with the mc. The writing quality is getting worse and worse as the story progress's, and everything is happening for the sake of growing the harem. This is **** with plot, stay away if you want to read a real fan fiction. This is another novel for the lonely who think if they reincarnated into another world they would be able to make a harem. First few chapters were amazing into it became a low quality plot ****.

sinaitakala
sinaitakalaLv3sinaitakala

Its is so nice cant wait to get to the end of the story 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 best story i ever read so nicee

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

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HORLERKINT
HORLERKINTLv10HORLERKINT

This is a great selection of the story, and it was marvelous, I enjoyed the reading and writing skills and knowledge of the most part of the writer and good luck to you

HentaiVeteran
HentaiVeteranLv4HentaiVeteran

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Melshan
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J3ffinh000
J3ffinh000Lv4J3ffinh000

It's good, it's fun and a lot of people like it. Don't mind **** perfectionists if they want perfect handwriting. Tell them to go to a bookstore and buy books

michael7022
michael7022Lv5michael7022

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unknownxpower
unknownxpowerLv10unknownxpower

Dont drop this plsssss Author dont mind the haters because their jealous of your novel. It just keeps getting better no one has the perfect novel everyone makes mistakes just keep doing what your doing.Its your novel

Vilma_Malimban
Vilma_MalimbanLv2Vilma_Malimban

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