Review Detail of Im_Sweepy in A Hero's Multiverse

2nd review. I just wanted to add that this novel is very sloppily done. The storyline is hard to follow, the grammar is somewhat readable but honestly, I could barely follow the story. I honestly don't think the author proofreads his chapters before publishing them. The story itself could of had a lot of potential like most fanfics do but the author's execution caused it to fail. There are many positive feedbacks so I assume I'm being too picky but I honestly don't recommend reading this unless you're looking for a novel that is done half-assed and will probably be dropped if the author doesn't start improving his quality of writing.