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Review Detail of DJason in A Hero's Multiverse

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DJason
DJasonLv155yrDJason

Eh writing quality. Stability is good SO FAR. Story development, actual garbage. What is even happening? Character design? Good! Only for deadpool tho :D World background, horrible integrated into this multiverse.

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A Hero's Multiverse

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Thanks for your reasonable criticism.🤗 As for writing quality... I know... I don't have an editor and am using a sometimes broken autocorrect program. As for the story development, it will get less confusing since I will limit myself to only a handful of realities after the MC gets his armor to make it all less confusing...