Feng Qian Shui
This book is quite unique to the overused female MC in a cultivation world plot line. I enjoy the fact that the ML is practically tethered to the FL and that he can save her when harm comes her way. Although their relationship is contractual as of now, it definitely won’t stay that way for long. The FL is afflicted with a poison that ruins her looks but even then the ML is still all over her - even if that may be because of her blood. I think that this novel has potential as it is right now and I hope to see more of it!
I have the feeling that all Chinese authors are simply copying each other's description. Mandatory points: - she rose from the ashes; - take revenge on relatives - Punish the ex-boyfriend; - some super op ml immediately falls in love with her. It is such a template in the description for such empty short stories. It is sad.
Okay so I dunno how tf this is that popular. Its so fcking generic its not even funny. Okay so the main problems I have is the grammar is absolute sht. The story is also all over the place making the flow awful. Another problem is how the author explains the characters features. Literally every time there mentioned its his jade like fingers, jade like legs, beautiful cherry red plump lips etc EVERY time a feature of a character is mentioned. To me this is just adding words to make the count longer, like WTF it annoys tf outta me, its just way too much. If these are improved then itll increase the quality massively in my opinion. Theres also hardly any info about her and the world shes in. I mean it went straight into action without explaining anything Not trying to hate. These are my honest opinions
I really like how the story started. The premise of the storyline was promising, but somehow I felt the development of the story fell so short at the second half of the book. It was flat out boring at the end. This is another case of the Author just "want to end the story quickly and be done with it" syndrome. If done right, the story could've grown into something promising and well constructed quality novel. On the plus side, I enjoyed the FL's character development and rise to power, which was constructed well and gage reader's interest to her personal growth. The politics & scheming behind almost everything was interesting to read. However, the ML is quite different, not your usual ML & thats what made the overall plotline interesting The background world was slightly dismal. The beginning part where Yun Jiuge lived before was alright, you could imagine the scenario of the ancient Chinese world and costumes, but after that, talking about different "continent" or world, it became a mess, except for the "beast world" which I enjoyed. The introduction to a new world or civilisation showed promise to the overall plotline, that was creative. I presume at one point, the Author has no interest to further develop the story because the abrupt ending. I was very disappointed with the overall. I gave 4 stars for translation was for common grammatical mistakes, especially the usage of "his", "her", "he" & "she". I thank the Translator for taking the time to translate the work until the end. Previously, there was a long period of "no updates" but I'm glad we have the closure needed. I'm just glad that it ended at 500+ chapters.