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Okay so I dunno how tf this is that popular. Its so fcking generic its not even funny. Okay so the main problems I have is the grammar is absolute sht. The story is also all over the place making the flow awful. Another problem is how the author explains the characters features. Literally every time there mentioned its his jade like fingers, jade like legs, beautiful cherry red plump lips etc EVERY time a feature of a character is mentioned. To me this is just adding words to make the count longer, like WTF it annoys tf outta me, its just way too much. If these are improved then itll increase the quality massively in my opinion. Theres also hardly any info about her and the world shes in. I mean it went straight into action without explaining anything Not trying to hate. These are my honest opinions

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The Unparalleled Spiritual Doctor: Demon Emperor's Defiant Love

Feng Qian Shui

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