Reviews of [Unknown]Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic
[Unknown]Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic
Captain_Nemo
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HEY FELLOW HAREM SECT NO HAREM HERE The author told me no harem very politely so let’s not be salty he seems like a chill dood we may only like harem novels so let us leave peacefully This dood is civilized and polite and witch we don’t see much When dealing with anyone he hates harems. (Also we don’t see it much in society anymore so yes author If you see this pat yourself on the back ) So say thank you for telling us and leave befor giving him a 5 Star revue cus he was nice enough to tell us
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Eh. Saying English is not your first language is not a shield for criticism. If it isn’t your first language then don’t write in English and post it to fanfiction.net. However, the author writes that to deflect criticism. Just spend more time editing chapters. The author takes it a step beyond laziness when he says that if there are inconsistencies that it’s not his fault. ITS NOT A FANFICTION IF YOU ARE JUST MAKING UP BULLSHIT YOU VAGUELY REMEMBER FROM MOVIES! As for the main characters personality, there is nothing worth speaking about. World background? I already explained how it’s basically how a fake fan of marvel who has watched a few movies sees Marvel.
Just read all the chapters currently available and so far the storyline and the pace is looking good. Must try if you are a fan of the MCU and want to get away from the usual 'Gaming System' type novels and try something else. No harem might be negative for some but I'd still recommend giving it a try. Also the author is currently on steroids so expect more than 4-5 chapters per day😂
Great story so far, but I don’t like the short chapters 😬 each chapter contains like 300-500 words or maybe shorter lolz. Also to the new readers don’t be deceived with the number of chapters. If the author had a proper word count it will probably just have 8-10 chapters available lolz. But everything apart from the word count in each chapter is good. Hope you will rewrite it someday and improve the world and character building and also 5e fuckin word count. Well, this is to be expected from a new author?
-chapter too short little -hell,fenrir, jormungand are the children of loki and Angrboda. and especially not odin's children -for divinity it depends of the character and kind of mc more hero(light/Sun/life) or anti hero bad (darkness/night/death) -give him magic summoning kind naruto very under developed -god of the dragon field of the beast god slaughter field blood god ice field frozen god destruction field chaos god darkness field shadow
thanks for the chapter....didn't expect that samsara would be there....at first the story are going smoothly until you make the mc change loki... the story becoming more mess up when you change the villain from avenger 1 ...and then you make the oc villain destroy the new york city.... but who would thought that Jesus was here to save the day.....but I still think that this story is already mess up but if you want to continue this book maybe you can make the mc collect all the infinity stone and change everything from the moment he was declare as a God.
Guy gets reborn as a God and asgard and trains for decades under the god of war tyr and and Tyr says”hey promise me that you will protect asgard” and this guy does nothing…. Says a lot about his lAckk of character and how selfish he is. Also why does he care about going to earth for canon so badly? These ppl act like living fir hundreds of years as all together diifferent species and still acts like a 15 yo human its ridiculous