Review Detail of Immortal_Potato in [Unknown]Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic
Review detail
Eh. Saying English is not your first language is not a shield for criticism. If it isn’t your first language then don’t write in English and post it to fanfiction.net. However, the author writes that to deflect criticism. Just spend more time editing chapters. The author takes it a step beyond laziness when he says that if there are inconsistencies that it’s not his fault. ITS NOT A FANFICTION IF YOU ARE JUST MAKING UP BULLSHIT YOU VAGUELY REMEMBER FROM MOVIES! As for the main characters personality, there is nothing worth speaking about. World background? I already explained how it’s basically how a fake fan of marvel who has watched a few movies sees Marvel.
[Unknown]Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic
Captain_Nemo
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Thanks for your review immortal potato but don't take this novel too seriously cause i only started writing it in my free time and that's the reason for inconsistencies and if you think that i have only watched marvel movies and am a fake fan then you can keep thinking that way, it's a free world and you can think whatever you want😁
He was too harsh. He can criticize your english but it kinda feels like derision at this point. Not like you'll ever get paid. Although personally I think most peeps on qidian should slow down their releases and do some more editing.
Captain_Nemo:Thanks for your review immortal potato but don't take this novel too seriously cause i only started writing it in my free time and that's the reason for inconsistencies and if you think that i have only watched marvel movies and am a fake fan then you can keep thinking that way, it's a free world and you can think whatever you want😁
you know the point of making a fanfiction is also to make up what you call bull****. If a fanfic is a copy of the original story than it has no meaning...Further english isn't his first language : even if it is said to shield from criticism , what is the problem? Noone is forcing you to read the story nor it is stated anywhere that on webnovel you can write works in english only if you hage got good grammar and good knowledge of english.
Captain_Nemo:Thanks for your review immortal potato but don't take this novel too seriously cause i only started writing it in my free time and that's the reason for inconsistencies and if you think that i have only watched marvel movies and am a fake fan then you can keep thinking that way, it's a free world and you can think whatever you want😁
